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Re: [xml2rfc-dev] Please help review v3 file: draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-multi-stream-optimisation-12

"Martin Thomson" <mt@lowentropy.net> Tue, 06 August 2019 00:03 UTC

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Date: Tue, 06 Aug 2019 10:03:54 +1000
From: Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net>
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Subject: Re: [xml2rfc-dev] Please help review v3 file: draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-multi-stream-optimisation-12
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On Tue, Aug 6, 2019, at 09:30, Sandy Ginoza wrote:
> Hi again,
> 
> Continuing with our request to review XMLv3 files, we’d appreciate your 
> input regarding draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-multi-stream-optimisation-12. 
> We’re hoping some of you will take the time to review the files and 
> provide feedback regarding whether the updates are as expected and the 
> XMLv3 files are considered “good” v3 files. 
> 
> NOTEs: 
> - As previously mentioned, we are aware there is an issue w/ sectionFormat.
> Example: text is missing from the output (Section 3.1) after this XML
> <xref target="RFC3550" sectionFormat="comma" section="6.3.7"/>
> 
> - Although it gives an error currently, our understanding is that using 
> xref in this manner (or similar) to create a link to a specific section 
> of an I-D will be possible (without relying on the target attribute of 
> the corresponding reference), per discussion with Henrik.
> <xref target="RTP-STREAMS" sectionFormat="of" section="5.4"/>
> 
> - we focused on format only; we did not make editorial updates. 
> 
> - the diff files compare the initial v2v3 output with the files we edited.
> 
> Please review the following files related to 
> draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-multi-stream-optimisation-12:
> 
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-multi-stream-optimisation-12-KC.v2v3.html
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-multi-stream-optimisation-12-KC.v2v3.pdf
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-multi-stream-optimisation-12-KC.v2v3.txt
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-multi-stream-optimisation-12-KC.v2v3.xml
> 
> Diff files:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-multi-stream-optimisation-12-KC.v2v3-xmldiff.html
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-multi-stream-optimisation-12-KC.v2v3-htmlwdiff.html
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> Sandy 
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