Re: [xmpp] Barry Leiba's Yes on draft-ietf-xmpp-6122bis-23: (with COMMENT)

[Barry Leiba <[e-mail]>]

Hi, Peter; thanks for the response.

> OLD
>    The domainpart of a JID is that portion which remains once any
>    portion from the first '/' character to the end of the string has
>    been removed (if there is a '/' character present), and then any
>    portion from the beginning of the string to the first '@' character
>    (if there is a '@' character present).
>
> NEW
>    The domainpart of a JID is that portion which remains once the
>    following parsing steps are taken:
>
>    1.  Remove any portion from the first '/' character to the end of the
>        string (if there is a '/' character present).
>
>    2.  Remove any portion from the beginning of the string to the first
>        '@' character (if there is a '@' character present).
>
>    This parsing order is important, as illustrated by example 15 in
>    Section 3.5.

Nice; thanks.

>> In Section 3.3.1, I find the "i.e."s to be distracting clutter, and
>> mildly recommend rendering those lines like this:
>>
>>        U+0022 (QUOTATION MARK): "
>>        U+0026 (AMPERSAND): &
>
> This might be confusing...
>
> U+003A (COLON): :

Ah, true.

> So I'll change the order to:
>
>       " U+0022 (QUOTATION MARK)
>       & U+0026 (AMPERSAND)
>       ' U+0027 (APOSTROPHE)
>       / U+002F (SOLIDUS)
>       : U+003A (COLON)
>       < U+003C (LESS-THAN SIGN)
>       > U+003E (GREATER-THAN SIGN)
>       @ U+0040 (COMMERCIAL AT)

Yes, that's a good way to handle it.

b