Re: [xmpp] Kathleen Moriarty's No Objection on draft-ietf-xmpp-posh-04: (with COMMENT)

Peter Saint-Andre - &yet <peter@andyet.net> Wed, 05 August 2015 15:25 UTC

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Subject: Re: [xmpp] Kathleen Moriarty's No Objection on draft-ietf-xmpp-posh-04: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Kathleen, thanks for the review.

On 8/4/15 1:42 PM, Kathleen Moriarty wrote:
> Kathleen Moriarty has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-xmpp-posh-04: No Objection
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> Nice work on this draft!  I do have a few comments that I'd like to chat
> about.
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> In the examples, could you switch them to have sha-256 as the low mark
> instead of sha-1?  sha-1 is only a problem if you need collision
> resistance, but since it's just used in examples, it might be easier to
> just get rid of it.

Good idea.

> In the first paragraph of the Security Considerations section, could you
> add a reference to RFC7525 as well?  Otherwise, it looks great.  It
> should fit in nicely after the RFC2818 reference. Thanks.

+1

Peter