Re: [xmpp] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-ietf-xmpp-websocket-04.txt

Lance Stout <lancestout@gmail.com> Mon, 21 April 2014 00:33 UTC

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On Apr 20, 2014, at 5:10 PM, Florian Zeitz <florob@babelmonkeys.de> wrote:

> One last remark I have is that I dislike (the formatting of) the example
> in Section 3.3.3:

I just published -05 which splits that into multiple examples, making that section read much better.

Thanks!

— Lance