[xmpp] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-xmpp-dna-10: (with COMMENT)

"Barry Leiba" <barryleiba@computer.org> Wed, 29 July 2015 09:46 UTC

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Subject: [xmpp] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-xmpp-dna-10: (with COMMENT)
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Barry Leiba has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-xmpp-dna-10: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Apart from the ".well-known" issue brought up in my comments to
xmpp-posh, I have only one, tiny comment here:

-- Section 1 --

   If such delegation is not done in
   a secure manner, then the domain name association cannot be verified.

Really small point: many people find these sorts of negative-negative
constructions to be confusing, so I suggest this:

NEW
   The domain name association can only be verified when the delegation
   is done in a secure manner.
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