Re: [xrblock] (2nd) WGLC for draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-jb

"Roni Even" <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Wed, 10 April 2013 08:09 UTC

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From: "Roni Even" <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [xrblock] (2nd) WGLC for draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-jb
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Hi,
I reviewed the document and it is ready for publication.

Just some nits

1. Section 3 5th paragraph "then then"

2. In section 3.1 "In practice jitter buffer implementations vary
considerably however should behave" suggest " In practice jitter buffer
implementations vary considerably however they should behave".

3. in section 4 change the two "should" to "SHOULD"

4. in section 4.2  in the " jitter buffer maximum delay" description "
earliest arriving packet In simple queue" to "earliest arriving packet. In
simple queue"

5. in section 5.2 " When SDP is used in offer-answer" suggest adding a
reference to RFC3264.


Roni Even


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Subject: [xrblock] (2nd) WGLC for draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-jb


This is the second WGLC for the Internet-Draft 'RTP Control Protocol (RTCP)
Extended Report (XR) Block for Jitter Buffer Metric Reporting'. Please send
your comments, questions, and concerns to the WG list before Monday 4/22
COB. If you have no comments or questions and you believe that this document
is ready for submission to the IESG for consideration as a Proposed
Standard, please send a message stating this. 

The latest version of the document can be retrieved from
http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-jb-10.txt.

Thanks and Regards,

Dan



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