Re: [xrblock] WGLC - draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-jb-02.txt

"Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com> Thu, 13 December 2012 13:25 UTC

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This document is in good shape, I have a couple of issues that need clarification: 

1. for all delay and water mark fields I see the following: 

>     If the measured value exceeds 0xFFFD, the value 0xFFFE SHOULD be
      reported to indicate an over-range measurement.  If the
      measurement is unavailable, the value 0xFFFF SHOULD be reported.

What are these SHOULD and not MUST? If there are exception cases please explain, if not s/SHOULD/MUST

2. in the jitter buffer maximum delay description the following sentence seems crippled: 

> In adaptive jitter buffer implementations,
      this value may dynamically.  

Something is missing here, please fix. 

Thanks and Regards,

Dan




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> This is a Working Group Last Call for http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-
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> Dan
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