Re: [xrblock] WGLC for aft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-burst-gap-loss-02.txt

"Huangyihong (Rachel)" <rachel.huang@huawei.com> Mon, 23 July 2012 09:35 UTC

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To: "Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com>, xrblock <xrblock@ietf.org>
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Hi,

I have read this document and believe it's in good shape. I have 3 minor comments:

1.  Section 3.2, the definition of " Loss and Discard Combination flag ": in some sentences, the key words "should" and "should not" are supposed to be capitalized.

2. Section 3.2, block length: 16 bits, "For the Delay block, the block length is equal to 5." should be corrected to "For the Burst/Gap Loss block, the block length is equal to 5."

3. Some editorial errors, for example, in the fourth paragraph of section 1.1, the space before the dot should be deleted.

Best regards,
Rachel


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From: xrblock-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:xrblock-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Romascanu, Dan (Dan)
Sent: Wednesday, July 11, 2012 10:56 PM
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Subject: [xrblock] WGLC for aft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-burst-gap-loss-02.txt

This message initiates a Working Group Last Call for the Internet-Draft
' RTCP XR Report Block for Burst/Gap Loss metric Reporting '. Please
read and send your comments, questions and concerns to the WG mail list
before 7/25 COB. 

If you read the document and you believe it's just fine and ready for
submission to the IESG please send a message stating this. 

The document is available at
http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-burst-gap-loss-02.txt.


Thanks and Regards,

Dan

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