Re: [xrblock] I-D Action: draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-qoe-07.txt

Qin,

While I think this is in good shape, I do still have some comments on this version:

The ABNF in Section 4.1 defines mediatype and mosreference rules. It’s not clear that these are needed: can’t the media types and resolution be inferred from the payload type? If they are needed, I think their purpose needs to be clearer, and the draft needs to better explain how they interact with SDP O/A, especially in terms of failure modes. 

The ABNF defines video and multimedia mediatypes, but this draft only defines audio metric report blocks. 

The ABNF and the table of registrations in the IANA considerations include P1201_01, P1201_02, P1202_01, and P1202_02 algorithms, which only work for multimedia or video, but this draft only defines audio metric report blocks.

The policies for the new registry of calculation algorithms in Section 5.4 state that the information require should include “how values of the metric are reported in the one 16-bit fields or 13-bit fields”, but the registration template and initial assignments do not do so. 

Regards,
Colin

On 14 May 2013, at 03:20, Qin Wu wrote:
> We have a minor update to QoE draft which incorporates the similar changes that are applied to burst gap related drafts.
> Also we add a new appendix to apply RFC6390 template.
> One comment was raised in the Last IETF meeting is about suggestion on soliciting review from SDP Directorate review for SDP part.
> We think the current version is ready to go for such review and WGLC.
> 
> Regards!
> -Qin
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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Metric Blocks for use with RTCP's Extended Report Framework Working Group of the IETF.
> 
> 	Title           : RTP Control Protocol (RTCP) Extended Report (XR) Blocks for QoE Metric Reporting
> 	Author(s)       : Alan Clark
>                          Qin Wu
>                          Roland Schott
>                          Glen Zorn
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-qoe-07.txt
> 	Pages           : 22
> 	Date            : 2013-05-13
> 
> Abstract:
>   This document defines an RTP Control Protocol (RTCP) Extended Report
>   (XR) Block including two new segment types and associated SDP
>   parameters that allow the reporting of QoE metrics for use in a range
>   of RTP applications.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-qoe
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> There's also a htmlized version available at:
> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-qoe-07
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> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-qoe-07
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