Re: [xrblock] AD evaluation: draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-video-lc-05
"Huangyihong (Rachel)" <rachel.huang@huawei.com> Mon, 23 November 2015 09:16 UTC
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To: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>, "xrblock@ietf.org" <xrblock@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [xrblock] AD evaluation: draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-video-lc-05
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Hi Alissa, Thank you for the comments. Will fix them in the next version. BR, Rachel From: xrblock [mailto:xrblock-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Alissa Cooper Sent: Saturday, November 21, 2015 2:24 AM To: xrblock@ietf.org Subject: [xrblock] AD evaluation: draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-video-lc-05 I have reviewed this document in preparation for IETF LC. I believe the document is in good shape and is ready for LC. I’ve noted below some nits that should be fixed together with any LC comments received. Thanks, Alissa == Sec 1.3 == "These metrics are applicable to video applications the video component of Audio/Video applications using RTP and applying packet loss concealment mechanisms which are incorporated into the receiving endpoint to mitigate the impact of network impairments on QoE." There is a grammar problem with this sentence. Please fix. s/Set Top Boxes/set top boxes/ == Sec 3 == s/as follow/as follows/ s/information.There/information. There/ s/methods slightly different/methods to be slightly different/ s/Thus, In this document/Thus, in this document/ == Sec 5.2 == s/unilateral parameter/unilateral parameters/ == Sec 6 == OLD Implementers SHOULD consider the guidance in [RFC7202] for using appropriate security mechanisms, i.e., where security is a concern, the implementation SHOULD apply encryption and authentication to the report block. NEW Implementers should consider the guidance in [RFC7202] for using appropriate security mechanisms. Where security is a concern, the implementation SHOULD apply encryption and authentication to the report block. (No need for normative directives about how to read other specs.) == Sec 7.3 == OLD RAI Area Directors rai-ads@tools.ietf.org<mailto:rai-ads@tools.ietf.org> NEW ART Area Directors art-ads@tools.ietf.org<mailto:art-ads@tools.ietf.org>
- [xrblock] AD evaluation: draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-… Alissa Cooper
- Re: [xrblock] AD evaluation: draft-ietf-xrblock-r… Huangyihong (Rachel)