Re: [xrblock] WGLC - draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-jb-02.txt

[Glen Zorn <[e-mail]>]

On 12/17/2012 03:24 PM, Claire Bi(jiayu) wrote:

>> I have a different  suggestion, now that I understand what you're
 >> trying to say :-). How about this:
 >>
 >> Real-time applications employ a jitter buffer to smooth out jitter
 >> introduced on the path from source to destination. These metrics
 >> are used to report how the jitter buffer at the receiving end of
 >> RTP stream behaves as a result of jitter in the network and are
 >> applicable to a range of RTP applications.
 >>
 >> These metrics reflect how terminal-related factors effect
 >> real-time application quality and are useful to provide better
 >> end-user quality of experience (QoE).
 >>
 >
 > This suggestion looks okay to me. Now the section can be better
 > understood. I have just one minor comment:
 >
 > In the last sentence, would it be better to use *affect* instead of
 > *effect*?
 >

Yup, my bad.

> Regards,
 >
 > Claire
 >
 >
 >