[xrblock] Stephen Farrell's No Objection on draft-ietf-xrblock-independent-burst-gap-discard-02: (with COMMENT)

"Stephen Farrell" <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie> Tue, 02 August 2016 21:52 UTC

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Stephen Farrell has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-xrblock-independent-burst-gap-discard-02: No Objection

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p3, 1st sentence: "it" (used twice) is ambiguous