[xrblock] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-xrblock-independent-burst-gap-discard-02: (with COMMENT)

"Ben Campbell" <ben@nostrum.com> Mon, 01 August 2016 21:45 UTC

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Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-xrblock-independent-burst-gap-discard-02: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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I have a few minor comments:

-1.1, 3rd paragraph, first sentence:
Is the "MUST" a new normative requirement, or a statement of fact
concerning 7003? If the later, please consider restating without the 2119
keyword.

- 2, last paragraph: 
"RECOMMENDS" also seems like a statement of fact.
Please expand "GMin" on first use.

-3.2, definition of "I": Why define "I=01" then forbid it's use?

-5, last sentence: Is the "MAY" a statement of fact?