Re: [yam] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC6409 (3995)

Randall Gellens <rg+ietf@qualcomm.com> Fri, 23 May 2014 15:08 UTC

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Subject: Re: [yam] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC6409 (3995)
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I think the wording is unclear and should be improved.  See in-line:

At 3:59 AM -0700 5/22/14, RFC Errata System wrote:

>  The following errata report has been submitted for RFC6409,
>  "Message Submission for Mail".
>
>  --------------------------------------
>  You may review the report below and at:
>  http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=6409&eid=3995
>
>  --------------------------------------
>  Type: Technical
>  Reported by: Tony Finch <dot@dotat.at>
>
>  Section: 8.7
>
>  Original Text
>  -------------
>     NOTE: SMTP [SMTP-MTA] prohibits the use of domain name aliases in
>     addresses and the session-opening announcement.  As with other SMTP
>     requirements, RFC 5321 effectively prohibits an MSA from forwarding
>     such messages into the public Internet.  Nonetheless, unconditionally
>     resolving aliases could be harmful.  For example, if www.example.net
>     and ftp.example.net are both aliases for mail.example.net, rewriting
>     them could lose useful information.
>
>
>  Corrected Text
>  --------------
>     NOTE: RFC 821 and RFC 1123 prohibited the use of domain name
>     aliases in addresses and the session-opening announcement.



>     Because of this it is still common for MTAs to canonicalize
>     domains in email addresses.

Because of what?  The prohibition on CNAMEs?

"it is still common for MTAs to" should be worded as "some MTAs" to 
be more factual (otherwise it raises questions of how common).

>   However this requirement was dropped

What requirement was dropped?  The wording should be clear.

>     during the development of RFC 2821.  The current rules about
>     domain name aliases are set out in RFC 5321 section 2.3.5.
>
>  Notes
>  -----
>
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>
>  --------------------------------------
>  RFC6409 (draft-ietf-yam-rfc4409bis-03)
>  --------------------------------------
>  Title               : Message Submission for Mail
>  Publication Date    : November 2011
>  Author(s)           : R. Gellens, J. Klensin
>  Category            : INTERNET STANDARD
>  Source              : Yet Another Mail
>  Area                : Applications
>  Stream              : IETF
>  Verifying Party     : IESG


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