Re: [yam] I-D Action:draft-ietf-yam-rfc1652bis-pre-evaluation-01.txt

Alexey Melnikov <alexey.melnikov@isode.com> Wed, 09 December 2009 19:02 UTC

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Dave CROCKER wrote:

> Internet-Drafts@ietf.org wrote:
>
>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts 
>> directories.
>> This draft is a work item of the Yet Another Mail Working Group of 
>> the IETF.
>
> Folks,
>
> Diffs from the -00 version are attached.

Dave,
I believe there are a couple of errors in your latest version:

     Add reference to [RFC2045].  Retain reference to [RFC1521].

Why do we need to retain the reference to RFC 1521?

     Add reference to [RFC2046].  Retain reference to [RFC1522].

This reference is not used anywhere in the document as far as I can see, so it should be deleted altogether.