Re: [yam] I-D Action:draft-ietf-yam-rfc1652bis-01.txt

Alessandro Vesely <vesely@tana.it> Mon, 25 January 2010 09:55 UTC

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On 20/Jan/10 23:45, Internet-Drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> 	Title           : SMTP Service Extension for 8-bit MIME Transport

Should section 2 mention that the extension is valid for both SMTP and 
Submit? I haven't got that bit quite straight, yet...

A similar nit is whether section 6.1 couldn't just say "IANA is asked 
to /update the entry of/ the SMTP Service Extensions registry" rather 
than /add an entry to/. Only the RFC number has to be changed in 
http://www.iana.org/assignments/mail-parameters, AFAICS.