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[yang-doctors] Last Call Reviews of documents associated with the change in the RFC Editor model

Dan Romascanu <dromasca@gmail.com> Mon, 14 February 2022 15:36 UTC

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From: Dan Romascanu <dromasca@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 14 Feb 2022 17:35:53 +0200
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Subject: [yang-doctors] Last Call Reviews of documents associated with the change in the RFC Editor model
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Hi,

I reviewed on behalf of the YANG Doctors team the four documents submitted
for comments associated with the change in the RFC Editor model. My reading
and review concerns only aspects related to documents related to YANG,
containing or refering to YANG models and the review process of these
documents.

Here are my findings and comments:

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-carpenter-rfced-iab-charter-05

Ready

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-rsalz-2028bis-05

Ready with Issues

The document is ready from the perspective of the YANG Doctors, with one
comment. The document does not mention in any place the role of the IETF
Directorates and review teams such as the YANG Doctors in the IETF
documents review process. As the reviews of these teams are part of the
process I suggest considering adding text, possibly in Section 3.

ttps://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-rosen-rfcefdp-update-2026-01
<https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-rosen-rfcefdp-update-2026-01>

Ready

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-iab-rfcefdp-rfced-model-11

Ready

Thanks and Regards,

Dan

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