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Re: [yang-doctors] Yangdoctors last call review of draft-ietf-netconf-notification-capabilities-05

Balázs Lengyel <balazs.lengyel@ericsson.com> Sun, 17 November 2019 03:50 UTC

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From: Balázs Lengyel <balazs.lengyel@ericsson.com>
To: Ladislav Lhotka <lhotka@nic.cz>, "yang-doctors@ietf.org" <yang-doctors@ietf.org>
CC: "last-call@ietf.org" <last-call@ietf.org>, "netconf@ietf.org" <netconf@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-netconf-notification-capabilities.all@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-netconf-notification-capabilities.all@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [yang-doctors] Yangdoctors last call review of draft-ietf-netconf-notification-capabilities-05
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-----Original Message-----
From: Ladislav Lhotka <lhotka@nic.cz> 
Sent: 2019. november 6., szerda 0:44
To: Balázs Lengyel <balazs.lengyel@ericsson.com>; yang-doctors@ietf.org
Cc: last-call@ietf.org; netconf@ietf.org; draft-ietf-netconf-notification-capabilities.all@ietf.org
Subject: Re: Yangdoctors last call review of draft-ietf-netconf-notification-capabilities-05
***** Appendix A. Instance data examples
>       - Example in Fig. 2: the <datastore> element has an incorrect
>         XML namespace (of the ietf-datastores module).
> BALAZS: I don't understand the comment; I don't see the error. Could 
> you please advise me what you think should be there? Exactly where?

This element:

        <datastore xmlns="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-datastores">
          ds:operational
        </datastore>

The re-declaration of the default XML namespace is wrong and should be removed (as in Fig. 1).
BALAZS2: OK

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