Re: [yang-doctors] [Last-Call] Yangdoctors last call review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-06

["Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong" <[e-mail]>]

Hi Tom,
I will address your comments.

Thanks.

Best Regards,
Paul

2021년 4월 12일 (월) 오후 6:59, tom petch <[e-mail]>님이 작성:

> Paul
>
> Some admin comments on -07; I think that you need to:
>
> - change the title in YANG revision reference
>
> - add to the I-D references
> RFC959
> RFC8632
>
> - shorten lines. There is a limit to line length in RFC as per the Style
> Guide.  This is exceeded in the YANG where some of the path statements
> take it over 80 while some of the examples are over 100.
>
> - add a reference for the import of
> ietf-i2nsf-policy-rule-for-nsf
>
> HTH
>
> Tom Petcb
>
> On 01/04/2021 03:09, Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong wrote:
> > Hi Andy, Linda, and Yoav,
> > Patrick and I have addressed all the comments from Andy.
> > Here is the revised draft -07:
> >
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-07
> >
> > I attach a revision letter to explain how we addressed the comments.
> >
> > There are the major updates in this revision as follows:
> > ---
> >     o  This version is revised according to the comments of Andy Bierman
> >        who is a YANG doctor.
> >
> >     o  This version updates its title as "I2NSF NSF Monitoring Interface
> >        YANG Data Model".  It clarifies the NSF Monitoring Interface to
> >        deliver NSF monitoring data to an NSF data collector (e.g.,
> >        Security Controller and NSF data analyzer).
> >
> >     o  This version adds an attack destination IP address for DDoS-attack
> >        event to provide an NSF data collector with more information
> about the
> >        destination of DDoS-attack packets.
> >
> >     o  This version supports a notification for monitoring traffic flows
> >       to detect the source and destination (as a victim) of security
> attacks
> >       such as DDoS attack.
> > ---
> > If you have questions and comments, please let me know.
> >
> > Thanks.
> >
> > Best Regards,
> > Paul
> >
> >
> > On Wed, Mar 24, 2021 at 3:34 AM Andy Bierman via Datatracker <
> > [e-mail]> wrote:
>