Re: [yang-doctors] [pim] I-D Action: draft-ietf-pim-msdp-yang-13.txt

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Thank you Sandy for addressing the last round of comments. I didn’t re-review the whole document, just made sure that comments were addressed. They have all been addressed for the exception of examples. There are still no examples, I believe you should have a config example, an operational example (with sa-cache) and action examples (clear-peer and clear-sa-cache) and all examples have to match.

Regards,
Reshad.

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Date: Wednesday, February 5, 2020 at 8:36 PM
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Subject: Fw:[pim] I-D Action: draft-ietf-pim-msdp-yang-13.txt


Hi,



13/14 version of MSDP YANG model has been submitted.

Please review the newest draft.

Thank you very much!



Best regards,

Sandy


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日 期 :2020年02月06日 08:18
主 题 :[pim] I-D Action: draft-ietf-pim-msdp-yang-13.txt

A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Protocols for IP Multicast WG of the IETF.

        Title           : A YANG Data Model for Multicast Source Discovery Protocol (MSDP)
        Authors         : Xufeng Liu
                          Zheng Zhang
                          Anish Peter
                          Mahesh Sivakumar
                          Feng Guo
                          Pete McAllister
    Filename        : draft-ietf-pim-msdp-yang-13.txt
    Pages           : 29
    Date            : 2020-02-05

Abstract:
   This document defines a YANG data model for the configuration and
   management of Multicast Source Discovery Protocol (MSDP) Protocol.


The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pim-msdp-yang/

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https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-pim-msdp-yang-13

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https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-pim-msdp-yang-13


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