[yang-doctors] Yangdoctors last call review of draft-ietf-netmod-factory-default-07
Carl Moberg via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Wed, 27 November 2019 14:35 UTC
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Subject: [yang-doctors] Yangdoctors last call review of draft-ietf-netmod-factory-default-07
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Reviewer: Carl Moberg Review result: Ready with Nits This is my YANG doctors review of the ietf-factory-default.yang module as part of draft-ietf-netmod-factory-default-07. The module cleanly passes validation using the YANG validator site and I have successfully loaded it into one NETCONF server implementation. This module is ready with a cosmetic nit and a suggestion. I suggest fixing the following textual nit: OLD configuration datastores (i.e.,<running> , <startup><candidate>) to their factory default content."; NEW: configuration datastores (i.e. <running>, <startup>, and <candidate>) to their factory default content."; I suggest adding a revision-date to the filename in the <CODE BEGINS> block. OLD: <CODE BEGINS> file "ietf-factory-default.yang" NEW: <CODE BEGINS> file "ietf-factory-default@2019-11-27.yang" (Obviously replacing the date with the release date of the module)
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