Re: [yang-doctors] 答复: Yangdoctors last call review of draft-ietf-ccamp-l1csm-yang-15
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From: "Joe Clarke (jclarke)" <jclarke@cisco.com>
To: Zhenghaomian <zhenghaomian@huawei.com>, "yang-doctors@ietf.org"
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Thanks for the changes, Haomian. On the YYYY note, you might want to explicitly call out that the RFC number there will be for ietf-layer1-types. With the subscriber-l1vc-sls-service-attributes grouping description, I'm still not sure it accurately reflects what it shows. I don't see how it provides a collection of values. Rather to me, it looks like a set of SLS attributes that provide a way to gauge service performance. Joe On 12/9/21 09:50, Zhenghaomian wrote: Hi Joe, Thank you very much for the review and useful comments. We are accepting all the proposals and please check the diffs from https://github.com/haomianzheng/IETF-ACTN-YANG-Model/pull/91/files. We plan to update the draft with latest yang/tree in a week, thanks. Best wishes, Haomian -----邮件原件----- 发件人: Joe Clarke via Datatracker [mailto:noreply@ietf.org] 发送时间: 2021年11月29日 21:41 收件人: yang-doctors@ietf.org<mailto:yang-doctors@ietf.org> 抄送: ccamp@ietf.org<mailto:ccamp@ietf.org>; draft-ietf-ccamp-l1csm-yang.all@ietf.org<mailto:draft-ietf-ccamp-l1csm-yang.all@ietf.org>; last-call@ietf.org<mailto:last-call@ietf.org> 主题: Yangdoctors last call review of draft-ietf-ccamp-l1csm-yang-15 Reviewer: Joe Clarke Review result: Ready with Nits I have been asked to review this draft and the L1CSM YANG module it includes on behalf of YANG Doctors. Overall, I think the draft/module is ready, but I did find a few small issues. First, please run "pyang -f yang" on this to normalize its formatting. There were a few spacing and other formatting issues that will be cleaned up by doing this. Other items are below: In the header of the YANG module, you import ietf-layer1-types with a mark of RFCYYYY. In your comment below calling out RFCXXXX (i.e., this RFC) it would be good to point the RFC Editor to YYYY as well. === In your identity definition section, you have a number of identity descriptions which are self-referential. Admittedly, this is one of my pet peeves, but if you could add more clarifying description text to identities such as one-way-delay, one-way-errored-second, etc. it would help implementors and operators better consume the YANG module without always needing to refer to external references. === Can time-interval be uint32 instead of int? I do not thing a negative time interval is possible/useful here. === The description of the grouping subscriber-l1vc-sls-service-attributes doesn't look accurate. This is not a value per se, but a collection of attributes. === In the /services/service list you explicitly have "mandatory true" for the key service-id. This is not needed since the key is mandatory.
- [yang-doctors] Yangdoctors last call review of dr… Joe Clarke via Datatracker
- [yang-doctors] 答复: Yangdoctors last call review o… Zhenghaomian
- Re: [yang-doctors] 答复: Yangdoctors last call revi… Joe Clarke (jclarke)
- [yang-doctors] 答复: 答复: Yangdoctors last call revi… Zhenghaomian
- Re: [yang-doctors] 答复: 答复: Yangdoctors last call … Joe Clarke (jclarke)