Re: [yang-doctors] Fw:[pim] I-D Action: draft-ietf-pim-msdp-yang-13.txt

tom petch <daedulus@btconnect.com> Fri, 07 February 2020 15:46 UTC

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Subject: Re: [yang-doctors] Fw:[pim] I-D Action: draft-ietf-pim-msdp-yang-13.txt
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Hi

I see it not on the FTP site but have found it on the tracker (the FTP 
site is SOOO much easier to use and SOOO much better at providing the 
real text:-)

You have sdded RFC4271 as  a reference - good - but you must also add it 
to the I-D References and to the list of RFC referenced

s.3.3 talks of RPC - there aren't any!

leaf size-in size-out; are these instaneous values, maxima,,, ? 
Description could clarify

leaf is-local-rp
which is true and which is false?  I know, I can work it out but it 
never does any harm to make it explicit in the description

RP needs expanding, as you do for SA.

Tom Petch



On 06/02/2020 01:35, zhang.zheng@zte.com.cn wrote:
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> 日 期 :2020年02月06日 08:18
> 主 题 :[pim] I-D Action: draft-ietf-pim-msdp-yang-13.txt
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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Protocols for IP Multicast WG of the IETF.
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>          Title           : A YANG Data Model for Multicast Source Discovery Protocol (MSDP)
>          Authors         : Xufeng Liu
>                            Zheng Zhang
>                            Anish Peter
>                            Mahesh Sivakumar
>                            Feng Guo
>                            Pete McAllister
>      Filename        : draft-ietf-pim-msdp-yang-13.txt
>      Pages           : 29
>      Date            : 2020-02-05
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>     This document defines a YANG data model for the configuration and
>     management of Multicast Source Discovery Protocol (MSDP) Protocol.
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> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pim-msdp-yang/
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