Re: [yang-doctors] YD review and yang-push and friends

Kent Watsen <kwatsen@juniper.net> Tue, 13 March 2018 01:58 UTC

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From: Kent Watsen <kwatsen@juniper.net>
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Now that the YD page has been restored, here's what it says:

"""

What to look for during a review

The most important item is to give the AD a sense of how important it is that they pay attention to the document. 
For YANG reviews the YANG Doctors will apply the RFC6087bis document on the Guidelines for Authors and Reviewers of YANG Data Model Documents ​https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6087bis/. The YANG language syntax and semantics should be analyzed. The compliance with ​Network Management Datastore Architecture should to be ensured (see also ​NMDA guidelines).

Review Information

Under some circumstances, the YANG doctors might discover open issues or provide feedback worth documenting for the larger community. While the NETMOD WG still work on RFC6087bis, updating this document is preferred. If the topic is not appropriate for the RFC6087bis or if RFC6087bis has already been published, then this must be documented on the YANG questions/answers WIKI https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/YANGDoctorsFAQ.

"""

The scope of the YD's review is unclear. 

K.


===== original message =====

One question coming up in my mind is against which criteria should such drafts be reviewed.
A YANG module has its review criteria defined in YANG RFCs.
However examples may be manifold and imperfect.

Cheers,
Mehmet

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Kent Watsen <kwatsen@juniper.net>
> Sent: Thursday, March 8, 2018 6:09 PM
> To: Mehmet Ersue <mersue@gmail.com>; 'Martin Bjorklund' <mbj@tail-
> f.com>
> Cc: yang-doctors@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [yang-doctors] YD review and yang-push and friends
> 
> 
> 
> > I did not start review for netconf-event-notifications-08.
> >
> > Netconf co-chairs: Please clarify whether a review is required.
> 
> 
> What's in a YANG Doctor review?  Is it just syntax, or semantics too?
> If it includes semantics, then does that then entail needing to read the draft
> text as well, to determine if the YANG module expresses the correct
> semantics or find that the draft text is wrong?  Would it also extend to
> reviewing the examples in the draft, to further ensure that the semantics are
> understood correctly or, possibly, that there is an error in the example?
> 
> Yes, I am aware that netconf-event-notifications does not define a YANG
> module, but it does have examples that for the YANG modules in the yang-
> push and subscriber-notifications drafts.  In that sense, I'm wondering if they
> need to be reviewed, or do we expect the YD reviewers of those other two
> drafts to look at this draft already?
> 
> FWIW, I not talking about what might be found via validation.  I've already
> asked the authors to post a script that validates the 14 examples in this
> draft...
> 
> 
> K.
>