Re: [6lo] Stephen Farrell's No Objection on draft-ietf-6lo-6lobac-06: (with COMMENT)
Kerry Lynn <kerlyn@ieee.org> Tue, 28 February 2017 22:55 UTC
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Subject: Re: [6lo] Stephen Farrell's No Objection on draft-ietf-6lo-6lobac-06: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Stephen, Thanks for your review. Comments inline... On Wed, Nov 30, 2016 at 3:30 AM, Stephen Farrell <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie> wrote: > Stephen Farrell has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-6lo-6lobac-06: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html > for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-6lo-6lobac/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > > - 1.3: "cost effective" and similar marketing language is > better avoided. I'd say deleting that sentence is better. > > Done. > - section 5: It's not clear to me why the 115k data rate > "dictates" header compression to reduce latency. I'm not > doubting that it might, but it's not clear from what's > stated that it does. > > <kel> Removed. The I-D now requires header compression without rationale, though it's mentioned in passing that header compression improves link utilization. </kel> > - Appendices B/C: I'm not clear how these are not part of > the standard. I think what you mean is that the code is > not, but the algorithms in fact are in fact necessary to > implement this. (I also agree with Alia's suggestion to add > the IETF trust <CODE BEGINS> stuff, assuming that's not > problematic.) > <kel> I failed to communicate to reviewers outside of 6lo wg that I can provide a copy of [BACnet] Clause 9, if requested. The I-D by itself is not sufficient to implement 6LoBAC; one would have to acquire the BACnet standard. However, I've tried to summarize enough of the standard so that a reader of the I-D can at least understand the complete packet format without needing the standard. The information in the Appendices is for that purpose. </kel> Thanks again, Kerry
- [6lo] Stephen Farrell's No Objection on draft-iet… Stephen Farrell
- Re: [6lo] Stephen Farrell's No Objection on draft… Kerry Lynn