Re: [Ace] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ace-coap-est-15

Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu> Thu, 10 October 2019 20:09 UTC

Return-Path: <kaduk@mit.edu>
X-Original-To: ace@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: ace@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 91B861200EF; Thu, 10 Oct 2019 13:09:37 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -4.199
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-4.199 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_MED=-2.3, SPF_HELO_NONE=0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001, URIBL_BLOCKED=0.001] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id R1zkauQaMJIt; Thu, 10 Oct 2019 13:09:36 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from outgoing.mit.edu (outgoing-auth-1.mit.edu [18.9.28.11]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id CFF33120089; Thu, 10 Oct 2019 13:09:35 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from kduck.mit.edu ([24.16.140.251]) (authenticated bits=56) (User authenticated as kaduk@ATHENA.MIT.EDU) by outgoing.mit.edu (8.14.7/8.12.4) with ESMTP id x9AK9SRk010597 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 bits=256 verify=NOT); Thu, 10 Oct 2019 16:09:30 -0400
Date: Thu, 10 Oct 2019 13:09:28 -0700
From: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu>
To: "Panos Kampanakis (pkampana)" <pkampana@cisco.com>
Cc: David Schinazi <dschinazi.ietf@gmail.com>, "draft-ietf-ace-coap-est.all@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-ace-coap-est.all@ietf.org>, "ace@ietf.org" <ace@ietf.org>
Message-ID: <20191010200928.GL76545@kduck.mit.edu>
References: <157033736912.16707.14556141146758239410@ietfa.amsl.com> <BN7PR11MB2547B7662924D30BBCA4B01AC99A0@BN7PR11MB2547.namprd11.prod.outlook.com>
MIME-Version: 1.0
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii
Content-Disposition: inline
In-Reply-To: <BN7PR11MB2547B7662924D30BBCA4B01AC99A0@BN7PR11MB2547.namprd11.prod.outlook.com>
User-Agent: Mutt/1.12.1 (2019-06-15)
Archived-At: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ace/Vb2hiIIBOs9ImFd5geWV9Qf8ilo>
Subject: Re: [Ace] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ace-coap-est-15
X-BeenThere: ace@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29
Precedence: list
List-Id: "Authentication and Authorization for Constrained Environments \(ace\)" <ace.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/ace>, <mailto:ace-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/ace/>
List-Post: <mailto:ace@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:ace-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ace>, <mailto:ace-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 10 Oct 2019 20:09:38 -0000

There will hopefully be a secdir review as well before the document goes
into IESG evaluation; given this is a pretty small change, I'd say hold off
on uploading for now.

Thanks for asking, and thanks David for the review,

Ben

On Tue, Oct 08, 2019 at 06:37:25PM +0000, Panos Kampanakis (pkampana) wrote:
> Thanks David. Done. I replaced the RFC7525 references with BCP195. 
> 
> Should I upload or will there be more Gen-ART reviews?
> 
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Ace <ace-bounces@ietf.org>; On Behalf Of David Schinazi via Datatracker
> Sent: Sunday, October 06, 2019 12:49 AM
> To: gen-art@ietf.org
> Cc: draft-ietf-ace-coap-est.all@ietf.org; ietf@ietf.org; ace@ietf.org
> Subject: [Ace] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ace-coap-est-15
> 
> Reviewer: David Schinazi
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
> 
> For more information, please see the FAQ at
> 
> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>;.
> 
> Document: draft-ietf-ace-coap-est-??
> Reviewer: David Schinazi
> Review Date: 2019-10-05
> IETF LC End Date: 2019-10-18
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary: Document is clear and well-written.
> 
> Major issues: None.
> 
> Minor issues: None.
> 
> Nits/editorial comments: I believe references to RFC7525 should instead refer to it as BCP195 to point to future revisions.
> 
> 
> _______________________________________________
> Ace mailing list
> Ace@ietf.org
> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ace