[Acme] Re: Secdir telechat review of draft-ietf-acme-ari-07

Aaron Gable <aaron@letsencrypt.org> Mon, 16 December 2024 18:36 UTC

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From: Aaron Gable <aaron@letsencrypt.org>
Date: Mon, 16 Dec 2024 10:36:12 -0800
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Thank you, I have addressed these nits in
https://github.com/aarongable/draft-acme-ari/pull/91, which will be
included in draft -08.

Aaron

On Sat, Dec 14, 2024 at 8:40 AM Shawn Emery via Datatracker <
noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

> Reviewer: Shawn Emery
> Review result: Has Nits
>
> This is a re-review from the 06 changes of this draft.  The 07 delta
> addresses
> my concern with unauthenticated requests but has additional nits with the
> new
> changes:
>
> s/5xx HTTP errors./5xx HTTP errors/
> s/not seed as a particular hindrance to this protocol/not unique to this
> protocol/
>
>
>