Re: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-cost-calendar-06.txt
Danny Alex Lachos Perez <dlachosper@gmail.com> Tue, 03 July 2018 21:23 UTC
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From: Danny Alex Lachos Perez <dlachosper@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-cost-calendar-06.txt
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Hello ALTO WG Some grammar, spelling, and punctuation issues about this draft are as follows: - Introduction - "Statement [RFC5693] and ALTO Requirements [RFC5693].Thus the current" - Consider adding a space after "[RFC5693]." - "locations, e.g. to reduce their costs. ALTO intentionally avoids" - "e.g. due to diurnal patterns of traffic demand or planned events such" - Consider adding a comma after "e.g." - "In this draft an "ALTO Cost Calendar" is specified by information" - Consider adding a comma after "In this draft" - Section 2 - "information resources capabilities, where as attributes with time" - where as -> whereas - "duration of the Calendar: e.g. the number of intervals provided" - Consider adding a comma after "e.g." - "IRD, the ALTO requests and responses for Cost calendars." - Consider adding a comma after "ALTO requests" - "historic or be a prediction for upcoming time periods." - historic -> historical - Section 3 - "example an ALTO Server may provide a calendar for ALTO values" - Consider adding a comma after "example" - Section 4 - "exchange: by providing it, an ALTO Server will avoid unecessary" - unecessary -> unnecessary - "When the Client gets the Calendar for "routingcost", it sees that the" - sees -> seems - "Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday and Thursday. The ALTO Client thus may" - Consider adding a comma after "Wednesday" - extra space after "Thursday." - Section 6 - "future in a calendar, this extension may improve availability of" - Consider adding the article "the" after "improve" Ss Danny Lachos On Tue, Jul 3, 2018 at 12:58 PM Vijay K. Gurbani <vijay.gurbani@nokia.com> wrote: > Dawn: Excellent. Thanks a lot. Jensen has also volunteered to look at > S6 and S7. > > As soon as you post your reviews of these sections by Wed, we'll move > the work ahead, subject to what you find in your review, of course. > > Cheers, > > On 07/03/2018 10:33 AM, Dawn Chan wrote: > > Hi Vijay, > > > > I can do a review of S6 and S7 too. > > > > Dawn > > > > > > ________________________________________ > > From: Jensen Zhang <jingxuan.n.zhang@gmail.com> > > Sent: Tuesday, July 3, 2018 10:55:18 AM > > To: Vijay K. Gurbani > > Cc: 92yichenqian@tongji.edu.cn; Chan Dawn; Randriamasy, Sabine (Nokia - > FR/Paris-Saclay); alto@ietf.org; geng.li@yale.edu > > Subject: Re: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-cost-calendar-06.txt > > > > Hi Vijay, > > > > I will give a review on S6 and S7 by Wednesday. > > > > Best, > > Jensen > > > > On Tue, Jul 3, 2018, 6:26 AM Vijay K. Gurbani <vijay.gurbani@nokia.com > <mailto:vijay.gurbani@nokia.com>> wrote: > > Sabine: Thank you for getting this out. I was hoping that all nits > > identified by IDNits tool will be taken care in this revision. > > Unfortunately, IDNits reports three warnings for -06. These need to be > > eventually fixed, perhaps as part of Auth-48, etc. > > > > But before I can send the draft to IESG, I need key members of the WG > > who have reviewed previous versions of this draft to review the newly > > added Security Considerations section. You only need to review this > > section, as previous versions of the draft were reviewed in their > > entirety. The new addition here is S6 (Security Considerations) and S7 > > (Operations Considerations). > > > > Can I please request a subset of the following people to review S6 and > S7: > > > > Yichen Qian, Li Geng, Dawn Chen, and Jensen Zhang > > > > I will like at least two people from the above set to read S6 and S7 and > > let the WG know whether the draft is ready to be moved out of the WG. > > > > Please do so soon, preferably by Wed midnight (US Eastern). The > > sections are short, but your reading and feedback to the WG will be > > invaluable. > > > > Thank you, > > > > On 07/02/2018 10:23 AM, Randriamasy, Sabine (Nokia - FR/Paris-Saclay) > wrote: > >> Hello, > >> > >> In this version 06: > >> > >> - Section 6 Security Considerations has been revised for a more > complete threat model, > >> - A new Section 7 "Operations Considerations" has been added and now > contains the initial text on Security Considerations of version > draft-ietf-alto-cost-calendar-05. > >> > >> Thanks, > >> Sabine > >> > >> -----Original Message----- > >> From: alto [mailto:alto-bounces@ietf.org<mailto:alto-bounces@ietf.org>] > On Behalf Of internet-drafts@ietf.org<mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org> > >> Sent: Monday, July 02, 2018 5:09 PM > >> To: i-d-announce@ietf.org<mailto:i-d-announce@ietf.org> > >> Cc: alto@ietf.org<mailto:alto@ietf.org> > >> Subject: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-cost-calendar-06.txt > >> > >> > >> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. > >> This draft is a work item of the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization > WG of the IETF. > >> > >> Title : ALTO Cost Calendar > >> Authors : Sabine Randriamasy > >> Richard Yang > >> Qin Wu > >> Lingli Deng > >> Nico Schwan > >> Filename : draft-ietf-alto-cost-calendar-06.txt > >> Pages : 27 > >> Date : 2018-07-02 > >> > >> Abstract: > >> The goal of Application-Layer Traffic Optimization (ALTO) is to > >> bridge the gap between network and applications by provisioning > >> network related information in order to allow applications to make > >> network informed decisions. The present draft extends the ALTO cost > >> information so as to broaden the decision possibilities of > >> applications to not only decide 'where' to connect to, but also > >> 'when'. This is useful to applications that need to schedule their > >> data transfers and connections and have a degree of freedom to do so. > >> ALTO guidance to schedule application traffic can also efficiently > >> help for load balancing and resources efficiency. Besides, the ALTO > >> Cost Calendar allows to schedule the ALTO requests themselves and > >> thus to save a number of ALTO transactions. > >> > >> This draft proposes new capabilities and attributes on filtered cost > >> maps and endpoint cost maps enabling an ALTO Server to provide "Cost > >> Calendars". These capabilities are applicable to ALTO metrics with > >> time-varying values. With ALTO Cost Calendars, an ALTO Server > >> exposes ALTO cost values in JSON arrays where each value corresponds > >> to a given time interval. The time intervals as well as other > >> Calendar attributes are specified in the IRD and ALTO Server > >> responses. > >> > >> > >> > >> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > >> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-cost-calendar/ > >> > >> There are also htmlized versions available at: > >> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-alto-cost-calendar-06 > >> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-alto-cost-calendar-06 > >> > >> A diff from the previous version is available at: > >> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-alto-cost-calendar-06 > >> > >> > >> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of > submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at > tools.ietf.org<http://tools.ietf.org>. > >> > >> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > >> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > >> > >> _______________________________________________ > >> alto mailing list > >> alto@ietf.org<mailto:alto@ietf.org> > >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto > >> > >> _______________________________________________ > >> alto mailing list > >> alto@ietf.org<mailto:alto@ietf.org> > >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto > >> > > > > - vijay > > -- > > Vijay K. Gurbani / vijay.gurbani@nokia.com<mailto: > vijay.gurbani@nokia.com> > > Network Data Science, Nokia Networks > > Calendar: http://goo.gl/x3Ogq > > > > - vijay > -- > Vijay K. Gurbani / vijay.gurbani@nokia.com > Network Data Science, Nokia Networks > Calendar: http://goo.gl/x3Ogq > > _______________________________________________ > alto mailing list > alto@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto >
- Re: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-cost-calen… Vijay K. Gurbani
- Re: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-cost-calen… Dawn Chan
- Re: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-cost-calen… Randriamasy, Sabine (Nokia - FR/Paris-Saclay)
- [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-cost-calendar-… internet-drafts
- Re: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-cost-calen… Y. Richard Yang
- Re: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-cost-calen… Vijay K. Gurbani
- Re: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-cost-calen… Y. Richard Yang
- Re: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-cost-calen… Jensen Zhang
- Re: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-cost-calen… Vijay K. Gurbani
- Re: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-cost-calen… Vijay K. Gurbani
- Re: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-cost-calen… Dawn Chan
- Re: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-cost-calen… Danny Alex Lachos Perez
- Re: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-cost-calen… Jensen Zhang
- Re: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-cost-calen… Randriamasy, Sabine (Nokia - FR/Paris-Saclay)