Re: [alto] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-alto-cost-calendar-09: (with COMMENT)

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Subject: Re: [alto] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-alto-cost-calendar-09: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Alissa,

Thanks for your comments, please see my update proposal inline,
All the best for 2019
Sabine


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Subject: Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-alto-cost-calendar-09: (with COMMENT)

Alissa Cooper has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-alto-cost-calendar-09: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Please use HTTPS URIs in the examples.

Section 4: I think the correct description of the time zone is actually UTC, per RFC 7231, even though timestamps get displayed with the acronym "GMT."

[[SR]] Paragraph 2 of secion 4 has been updated as follows. Is that ok?

"The reference time zone for the provided time values is UTC because
      the option chosen to express the time format is the HTTP header fields
      format specified in <xref target="RFC7231"/> where however timestamps 
      are still displayed with the acronym GMT:"