[art] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-cose-cwt-claims-in-headers-06

Claudio Allocchio via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 19 October 2023 07:49 UTC

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Subject: [art] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-cose-cwt-claims-in-headers-06

Reviewer: Claudio Allocchio
Review result: Ready with Nits

The document is basically well written and clear. The only nits I suggest to
fix is in the security chapter: it seems a copy/paste of the same sections as
RFC 7519 one, but maybe some "expanded statements" on the implication of
external signature use and in case about potential risks associated may help
the non security expert implementer to better understand the whole picture.

Given the above, the document is ready to go.

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