[Asdf] Re: editorial: rephrase
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From: "Bart Brinckman (bbrinckm)" <bbrinckm@cisco.com>
To: Eliot Lear <lear@lear.ch>, "asdf@ietf.org" <asdf@ietf.org>
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Thank you Eliot for creating the inaugural issue on the NIPC repo after the move to asdf-wg! We will be deprecating individual property and event registration API’s and implementing a single SDF model registration API, so rather than cleaning up the text right now, we will be revisiting this section and make sure to take your comment into account at that time. Will leave the issue open until then and target mineral-water level clarity! Thanks! Bart From: Eliot Lear <lear@lear.ch> Date: Thursday, 7 November 2024 at 09:01 To: asdf@ietf.org <asdf@ietf.org> Subject: [Asdf] editorial: rephrase Dear NIPC authors, The following appears in your draft: Registration elements are elements that do not directly execute operations on devices but register attributes on the gateway that support operations, such attributes are topics for data streaming and files to write files. It's clear as mud (and I ought to know). See issue 51. Eliot
- [Asdf] editorial: rephrase Eliot Lear
- [Asdf] Re: editorial: rephrase Bart Brinckman (bbrinckm)
- [Asdf] Re: editorial: rephrase Michael Richardson