[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9903 <draft-ietf-ospf-sr-yang-50> for your review

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Hi Authors,

Thank you for sending your approvals. They have been noted here:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9903

We have one additional question for Jeffrey.

Jeffrey - Would you like us to update your email address and affiliation in the document? If yes, please provide us with your affiliation information and we will updated the files accordingly.

Once this question has been addressed, we will move this document forward in the publication process.

Best regards,
Alanna Paloma
RFC Production Center

> On Dec 4, 2025, at 10:48 AM, Zhang, Zhaohui <zhaohui.zhang@hpe.com> wrote:
> 
> I approve, too.
> 
> Thanks.
> Jeffrey (removed my old email address)
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Helen Chen <ichen@redhat.com> 
> Sent: Thursday, December 4, 2025 1:11 PM
> To: Acee Lindem <acee.ietf@gmail.com>
> Cc: Jeffrey (Zhaohui) Zhang <zzhang@juniper.net>; Alanna Paloma <apaloma@staff.rfc-editor.org>; Yingzhen Qu <yingzhen.ietf@gmail.com>; Editor RFC <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>; lsr-ads@ietf.org; lsr-chairs@ietf.org; chopps@chopps.org; auth48archive <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>; Gunter van de Velde (Nokia) <gunter.van_de_velde@nokia.com>
> Subject: Re: [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9903 <draft-ietf-ospf-sr-yang-50> for your review
> Importance: High
> 
> I approve.
> 
> Thanks,
> Helen
> 
>> On Dec 4, 2025, at 1:02 PM, Acee Lindem <acee.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
>> 
>> Jeffrey and Helen - Please review and approve ASAP. 
>> 
>> Jeffrey - I can't look at my IETF Email without seeing copious Emails 
>> from your esteemed colleagues - Now I'm just asking to see one from 
>> you 😎
>> 
>> Thanks,
>> Acee
>> 
>>> On Dec 2, 2025, at 7:16 AM, Acee Lindem <acee.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
>>> 
>>> Hi Yingzhen, Jeffrey, and Helen,
>>> 
>>> Please review and approve. 
>>> 
>>> Thanks,
>>> Acee
>>> 
>>>> On Dec 2, 2025, at 5:07 AM, Gunter van de Velde (Nokia) <gunter.van_de_velde@nokia.com> wrote:
>>>> 
>>>> Hi Alanna,
>>>> 
>>>> Please see inline: GV>
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> From: Alanna Paloma <apaloma@staff.rfc-editor.org>
>>>> Sent: Monday, December 01, 2025 6:56 PM
>>>> To: Acee Lindem <acee.ietf@gmail.com>; Gunter van de Velde (Nokia) 
>>>> <gunter.van_de_velde@nokia.com>
>>>> Cc: Yingzhen Qu <yingzhen.ietf@gmail.com>; Jeffrey (Zhaohui) Zhang 
>>>> <zzhang@juniper.net>; Editor RFC <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>; 
>>>> lsr-ads@ietf.org <lsr-ads@ietf.org>; lsr-chairs@ietf.org 
>>>> <lsr-chairs@ietf.org>; chopps@chopps.org <chopps@chopps.org>; 
>>>> auth48archive <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>; Helen Chen 
>>>> <ichen@redhat.com>
>>>> Subject: [AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9903 
>>>> <draft-ietf-ospf-sr-yang-50> for your review
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> CAUTION: This is an external email. Please be very careful when clicking links or opening attachments. See the URL nok.it/ext for additional information.
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> Hi Acee and Gunter (AD)*,
>>>> 
>>>> *Gunter - As the AD, please review and approve of the following updates:
>>>> - Section 1: removed text
>>>> GV> approved
>>>> 
>>>> - Section 3 (within the YANG module): added text
>>>> GV> approved. The added text makes the document more clear.
>>>> 
>>>> - Section 6.2: removed informative reference entry for RFC 8342
>>>> GV> Approved. The line mentioning this was removed, so indeed no more need.
>>>> 
>>>> See this diff file:
>>>> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc99
>>>> 03-auth48diff.html__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!CcxYvcmCyEOUwjL8HoP9_SMgG_eu4H8uI
>>>> S6AdQEEbbedI-0BxULTAO2IwYn3es9lj1-3QC-7-9duOg$
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> Acee - Thank you for your replies. We’ve updated the files accordingly.
>>>> 
>>>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
>>>> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc99
>>>> 03.txt__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!CcxYvcmCyEOUwjL8HoP9_SMgG_eu4H8uIS6AdQEEbbedI
>>>> -0BxULTAO2IwYn3es9lj1-3QC-1c1LMtw$
>>>> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc99
>>>> 03.pdf__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!CcxYvcmCyEOUwjL8HoP9_SMgG_eu4H8uIS6AdQEEbbedI
>>>> -0BxULTAO2IwYn3es9lj1-3QC_s2qkiUQ$
>>>> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc99
>>>> 03.html__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!CcxYvcmCyEOUwjL8HoP9_SMgG_eu4H8uIS6AdQEEbbed
>>>> I-0BxULTAO2IwYn3es9lj1-3QC-W4B-d3Q$
>>>> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc99
>>>> 03.xml__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!CcxYvcmCyEOUwjL8HoP9_SMgG_eu4H8uIS6AdQEEbbedI
>>>> -0BxULTAO2IwYn3es9lj1-3QC8NZTmYdw$
>>>> 
>>>> The relevant diff files are posted here:
>>>> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc99
>>>> 03-diff.html__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!CcxYvcmCyEOUwjL8HoP9_SMgG_eu4H8uIS6AdQE
>>>> EbbedI-0BxULTAO2IwYn3es9lj1-3QC_BFGnWdg$  (comprehensive diff) 
>>>> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc99
>>>> 03-auth48diff.html__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!CcxYvcmCyEOUwjL8HoP9_SMgG_eu4H8uI
>>>> S6AdQEEbbedI-0BxULTAO2IwYn3es9lj1-3QC-7-9duOg$  (all AUTH48 changes) 
>>>> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc99
>>>> 03-lastdiff.html__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!CcxYvcmCyEOUwjL8HoP9_SMgG_eu4H8uIS6
>>>> AdQEEbbedI-0BxULTAO2IwYn3es9lj1-3QC-3mgLdew$  (htmlwdiff diff 
>>>> between last version and this) 
>>>> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc99
>>>> 03-lastrfcdiff.html__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!CcxYvcmCyEOUwjL8HoP9_SMgG_eu4H8u
>>>> IS6AdQEEbbedI-0BxULTAO2IwYn3es9lj1-3QC_ZluRN9Q$  (rfcdiff between 
>>>> last version and this)
>>>> 
>>>> We will await any further changes you may have as well as approvals from each author and *Gunter (AD) prior to moving this document forward in the publication process.
>>>> 
>>>> Thank you,
>>>> Alanna Paloma
>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>> 
>>>>> On Dec 1, 2025, at 3:53 AM, Acee Lindem <acee.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
>>>>> 
>>>>> Hi Alana,
>>>>> 
>>>>> Removed RFC 8342 reference as well. Complete set of editorial diffs attached.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Thanks,
>>>>> Acee
>>>>> <rfc9903.orig.diff.html>
>>>>> 
>>>>>> On Nov 29, 2025, at 4:08 PM, Acee Lindem <acee.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Hi Alana,
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Here is my complete set of editorial comments in RFC diff format.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Thanks,
>>>>>> Acee
>>>>>> <rfc9903.orig.diff.html>
>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> On Nov 29, 2025, at 3:20 PM, Acee Lindem <acee.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Hi Alana,
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> On Nov 28, 2025, at 5:28 PM, Acee Lindem <acee.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Hi Alana,
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> I have the following editorial comments on the current version. None of these suggested changes should require AD approval.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Note that I'm keeping my former LabN affiliation in the draft since I did much of the work while working there.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> I have one question, does the YANG model itself need to have the 
>>>>>>>> first instance of non-well-known acronyms expanded on the first usage? If so, there are some that need to be expanded (e.g., SRMS, IP-FRR, and RLFA).
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> SRMS seems to be the only one needed. Please add the first-use expansion to the YANG model as well.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> *** 694,703 ****
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>  grouping srms-preference-tlv {
>>>>>>>    description
>>>>>>> !          "The SRMS Preference TLV is used to advertise a preference
>>>>>>> !           associated with the node that acts as an SRMS.  SRMS
>>>>>>> !           advertisements with a higher preference value are preferred
>>>>>>> !           over those with a lower preference value.";
>>>>>>>    reference
>>>>>>>      "RFC 8665: OSPF Extensions for Segment Routing, Section 3.4";
>>>>>>>    container srms-preference-tlv {
>>>>>>> --- 692,702 ----
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>  grouping srms-preference-tlv {
>>>>>>>    description
>>>>>>> !          "The Segment Routing Mapping Server (SRMS) Preference TLV is
>>>>>>> !           used to advertise a preference associated with the node that
>>>>>>> !           acts as an SRMS.  SRMS advertisements with a higher
>>>>>>> !           preference value are preferred over those with a lower
>>>>>>> !           preference value.";
>>>>>>>    reference
>>>>>>>      "RFC 8665: OSPF Extensions for Segment Routing, Section 3.4";
>>>>>>>    container srms-preference-tlv {
>>>>>>> ***************
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Thanks,
>>>>>>> Acee
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> For the first change, note that we have been removing this statement from the abstract in other RFCs (e.g., RFC 9020).
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> ***************
>>>>>>>> *** 74,82 ****
>>>>>>>> MPLS data plane.  The defined YANG data model is an augmentation 
>>>>>>>> to the OSPF YANG data model [RFC9129].
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> -    The YANG data model in this document conforms to the Network
>>>>>>>> -    Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA) [RFC8342].
>>>>>>>> -
>>>>>>>> 1.1.  Requirements Language
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL 
>>>>>>>> NOT",
>>>>>>>> --- 74,79 ----
>>>>>>>> ***************
>>>>>>>> *** 105,111 ****
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> The "ietf-ospf-sr-mpls" module defines both the data nodes to 
>>>>>>>> configure OSPF Segment Routing MPLS extensions and the additions to
>>>>>>>> !    the OSPF Link State Advertisements (LSAs) necessary to support
>>>>>>>> Segment Routing over MPLS (SR-MPLS).  The OSPF configuration
>>>>>>>> includes:
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> --- 102,108 ----
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> The "ietf-ospf-sr-mpls" module defines both the data nodes to 
>>>>>>>> configure OSPF Segment Routing MPLS extensions and the additions to
>>>>>>>> !    OSPF Link State Advertisements (LSAs) necessary to support
>>>>>>>> Segment Routing over MPLS (SR-MPLS).  The OSPF configuration
>>>>>>>> includes:
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> ***************
>>>>>>>> *** 348,354 ****
>>>>>>>>   base extended-prefix-range-flag;
>>>>>>>>   description
>>>>>>>>     "Inter-Area flag.  Note that this is only applicable to OSPFv2
>>>>>>>> !           since OSPFv3 advertises separate Inter-Area extended-LSA.";
>>>>>>>>   reference
>>>>>>>>     "RFC 8665: OSPF Extensions for Segment Routing, Section 4";  
>>>>>>>> }
>>>>>>>> --- 345,351 ----
>>>>>>>>   base extended-prefix-range-flag;
>>>>>>>>   description
>>>>>>>>     "Inter-Area flag.  Note that this is only applicable to OSPFv2
>>>>>>>> !           since OSPFv3 advertises separate Inter-Area extended-LSAs.";
>>>>>>>>   reference
>>>>>>>>     "RFC 8665: OSPF Extensions for Segment Routing, Section 4";  
>>>>>>>> }
>>>>>>>> ***************
>>>>>>>> *** 500,506 ****
>>>>>>>>     "RFC 8665: OSPF Extensions for Segment Routing, Section 4";
>>>>>>>>   container extended-prefix-range-tlvs {
>>>>>>>>     description
>>>>>>>> !            "List of range of prefixes.";
>>>>>>>>     list extended-prefix-range-tlv {
>>>>>>>>       description
>>>>>>>>         "Range of prefixes.";
>>>>>>>> --- 497,503 ----
>>>>>>>>     "RFC 8665: OSPF Extensions for Segment Routing, Section 4";
>>>>>>>>   container extended-prefix-range-tlvs {
>>>>>>>>     description
>>>>>>>> !            "List of prefix ranges.";
>>>>>>>>     list extended-prefix-range-tlv {
>>>>>>>>       description
>>>>>>>>         "Range of prefixes.";
>>>>>>>> ***************
>>>>>>>> *** 662,668 ****
>>>>>>>>       leaf range-size {
>>>>>>>>         type rt-types:uint24;
>>>>>>>>         description
>>>>>>>> !                "SID range.";
>>>>>>>>       }
>>>>>>>>       uses sid-tlv-encoding;
>>>>>>>>     }
>>>>>>>> --- 659,666 ----
>>>>>>>>       leaf range-size {
>>>>>>>>         type rt-types:uint24;
>>>>>>>>         description
>>>>>>>> !                "SID range.  The return of a zero value would indicate
>>>>>>>> !                 an error.";
>>>>>>>>       }
>>>>>>>>       uses sid-tlv-encoding;
>>>>>>>>     }
>>>>>>>> ***************
>>>>>>>> *** 869,875 ****
>>>>>>>>     "This augments the OSPF protocol configuration with Segment
>>>>>>>>      Routing over the MPLS data plane.  The following semantic
>>>>>>>>      validation is to be performed for the configuration data:
>>>>>>>> !            - Assure the binding policies prefixes do not overlap.";
>>>>>>>>   reference
>>>>>>>>     "RFC 9020: YANG Data Model for Segment Routing";
>>>>>>>>   uses sr-mpls:sr-control-plane;
>>>>>>>> --- 868,875 ----
>>>>>>>>     "This augments the OSPF protocol configuration with Segment
>>>>>>>>      Routing over the MPLS data plane.  The following semantic
>>>>>>>>      validation is to be performed for the configuration data:
>>>>>>>> !            - Assure prefixes specified in binding policies do not
>>>>>>>> !              overlap.";
>>>>>>>>   reference
>>>>>>>>     "RFC 9020: YANG Data Model for Segment Routing";
>>>>>>>>   uses sr-mpls:sr-control-plane;
>>>>>>>> ***************
>>>>>>>> *** 934,940 ****
>>>>>>>>            configuration.";
>>>>>>>>       }
>>>>>>>>       description
>>>>>>>> !              "This augments LAN interface adj-sid with neighbor-id.";
>>>>>>>>       leaf neighbor-id {
>>>>>>>>         type inet:ip-address;
>>>>>>>>         mandatory true;
>>>>>>>> --- 934,941 ----
>>>>>>>>            configuration.";
>>>>>>>>       }
>>>>>>>>       description
>>>>>>>> !              "This augments multi-access interface adj-sids with a
>>>>>>>> !               neighbor-id.";
>>>>>>>>       leaf neighbor-id {
>>>>>>>>         type inet:ip-address;
>>>>>>>>         mandatory true;
>>>>>>>> ***************
>>>>>>>> *** 1072,1078 ****
>>>>>>>>     leaf protection-requested {
>>>>>>>>       type boolean;
>>>>>>>>       description
>>>>>>>> !              "Describe if the Adj-SID is protected.";
>>>>>>>>     }
>>>>>>>>   }
>>>>>>>> }
>>>>>>>> --- 1073,1079 ----
>>>>>>>>     leaf protection-requested {
>>>>>>>>       type boolean;
>>>>>>>>       description
>>>>>>>> !              "Indicate if the Adj-SID is protected.";
>>>>>>>>     }
>>>>>>>>   }
>>>>>>>> }
>>>>>>>> ***************
>>>>>>>> *** 1414,1420 ****
>>>>>>>>       "This augmentation is only valid for OSPFv3.";
>>>>>>>>   }
>>>>>>>>   description
>>>>>>>> !          "SR Prefix-SID Sub-TLV in OSPFv3 Link-Scoped Intra-Area-Prefix
>>>>>>>>      TLV for OSPFv3 E-Inter-Area-Prefix LSAs.";
>>>>>>>>   reference
>>>>>>>>     "RFC 8666: OSPFv3 Extensions for Segment Routing, Section 
>>>>>>>> 6";
>>>>>>>> --- 1415,1421 ----
>>>>>>>>       "This augmentation is only valid for OSPFv3.";
>>>>>>>>   }
>>>>>>>>   description
>>>>>>>> !          "SR Prefix-SID Sub-TLV in OSPFv3 Intra-Area-Prefix
>>>>>>>>      TLV for OSPFv3 E-Inter-Area-Prefix LSAs.";
>>>>>>>>   reference
>>>>>>>>     "RFC 8666: OSPFv3 Extensions for Segment Routing, Section 
>>>>>>>> 6";
>>>>>>>> ***************
>>>>>>>> *** 1480,1486 ****
>>>>>>>>        E-Router LSAs.";
>>>>>>>>   }
>>>>>>>>   description
>>>>>>>> !          "SR Sub-TLVs in OSPFv3 link-tlv for OSPFv3 E-Router LSAs.";
>>>>>>>>   reference
>>>>>>>>     "RFC 8666: OSPFv3 Extensions for Segment Routing, Section 7";
>>>>>>>>   uses ospfv3-adj-sid-sub-tlvs;
>>>>>>>> --- 1481,1488 ----
>>>>>>>>        E-Router LSAs.";
>>>>>>>>   }
>>>>>>>>   description
>>>>>>>> !          "SR Sub-TLVs in OSPFv3 Router-Link TLV for OSPFv3 E-Router
>>>>>>>> !           LSAs.";
>>>>>>>>   reference
>>>>>>>>     "RFC 8666: OSPFv3 Extensions for Segment Routing, Section 7";
>>>>>>>>   uses ospfv3-adj-sid-sub-tlvs;
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Thanks,
>>>>>>>> Acee
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> On Nov 25, 2025, at 3:58 PM, Alanna Paloma <apaloma@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Hi Authors,
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Thank you for your replies.  We have updated as requested.
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> ) FYI - We have moved Derek Yeung’s name out of the YANG module and into this sentence in the Acknowledgements section. Please review and let us know if any further updates are needed.
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>>> The authors wish to thank Dean Bogdanovic and Kiran Koushik 
>>>>>>>>> Agrahara Sreenivasa for their YANG module discussions.
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Current:
>>>>>>>>> The authors wish to thank Dean Bogdanovic, Kiran Koushik 
>>>>>>>>> Agrahara Sreenivasa, and Derek Yeung for their YANG module discussions.
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> 9) <!--[rfced] We note that Derek Yeung is listed as an author 
>>>>>>>>>> in the YANG module but is not listed as an author of this 
>>>>>>>>>> document. Should we remove his name from the YANG module and 
>>>>>>>>>> add it to the Acknowledgements section?
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>>>> Author:   Derek Yeung
>>>>>>>>>>           <mailto:derek@arrcus.com>
>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> [Yingzhen]: Yes, please add Derek to the acknowledgements.
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> 
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>>>>>>>>> 
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>>>>>>>>> Thank you,
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>>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> On Nov 25, 2025, at 8:55 AM, Helen Chen <ichen=40redhat.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Thanks to Yingzhen for adding my new email address.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Hello RFC Editor,
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Please update my (Ing-Wher Chen) email address and affiliation if possible.  Along with the affiliation change, please also remove the last paragraph in the “Acknowledgments” section.  That paragraph currently states "Author affiliation with The MITRE Corporation…”.
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>> Thanks,
>>>>>>>>>> Helen
>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> On Nov 21, 2025, at 2:30 PM, Yingzhen Qu <yingzhen.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Adding Helen's new email address.
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Thanks,
>>>>>>>>>>> Yingzhen
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> On Fri, Nov 21, 2025 at 10:58 AM <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>> Authors,
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) the following questions, which are also in the source file.
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that 
>>>>>>>>>>> appear in the title) for use on 
>>>>>>>>>>> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/search
>>>>>>>>>>> __;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!CcxYvcmCyEOUwjL8HoP9_SMgG_eu4H8uIS6AdQEEbbed
>>>>>>>>>>> I-0BxULTAO2IwYn3es9lj1-3QC-lXv1q3w$ . -->
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 2) <!-- [rfced] We note that there is no mention of an "sr-protocol grouping"
>>>>>>>>>>> in RFC 9020, but it does use "'sr-control-plane' grouping". 
>>>>>>>>>>> Should the parenthetical text below be updated to match what appears in RFC 9020?
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>>>>> *  OSPF instance level configuration imported from the 
>>>>>>>>>>> ietf-segment- routing-mpls YANG module including the mapping 
>>>>>>>>>>> server bindings and the per-protocol Segment Routing Global 
>>>>>>>>>>> Block (SRGB) (refer to the sr-protocol grouping [RFC9020]).
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>>>>>>>> *  OSPF instance level configuration imported from the 
>>>>>>>>>>> ietf-segment- routing-mpls YANG module including the mapping 
>>>>>>>>>>> server bindings and the per-protocol Segment Routing Global 
>>>>>>>>>>> Block (SRGB) (refer to the "sr-control-plane" grouping [RFC9020]).
>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 3) <!-- [rfced] We note that RFCs 8665 and 8666 use "Extended Prefix Range TLV"
>>>>>>>>>>> rather than "extended range TLV". May we update the two list 
>>>>>>>>>>> items below to match the corresponding RFCs?
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>>>>> *  OSPFv2 extended range TLV encodings [RFC8665] in the OSPF 
>>>>>>>>>>> Extended-Prefix Opaque LSA [RFC7684].
>>>>>>>>>>> ...
>>>>>>>>>>> *  OSPFv3 extended range TLV encodings [RFC8666] in the 
>>>>>>>>>>> OSPFv3 E- Intra-Area-Prefix-LSA, E-Inter-Area-Prefix-LSA, 
>>>>>>>>>>> E-AS-External-LSA, and E-Type-7-LSA [RFC8362].
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>>>>>>>> *  OSPFv2 Extended Prefix Range TLV encodings [RFC8665] in 
>>>>>>>>>>> the OSPF Extended-Prefix Opaque LSA [RFC7684].
>>>>>>>>>>> ...
>>>>>>>>>>> *  OSPFv3 Extended Prefix Range TLV encodings [RFC8666] in 
>>>>>>>>>>> the OSPFv3 E- Intra-Area-Prefix-LSA, E-Inter-Area-Prefix-LSA, 
>>>>>>>>>>> E-AS-External-LSA, and E-Type-7-LSA [RFC8362].
>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 4) <!--[rfced] FYI - We have removed the following items from 
>>>>>>>>>>> their corresponding lists in Section 2 as they were each listed twice.
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>>>>> *  OSPFv2 Prefix SID Sub-TLV encodings [RFC8665] included the 
>>>>>>>>>>> OSPF Extended Prefix TLV which is advertised in the OSPF 
>>>>>>>>>>> Extended Prefix Opaque LSA [RFC7684].
>>>>>>>>>>> ...
>>>>>>>>>>> *  OSPFv3 extended range TLV encodings [RFC8666] in the 
>>>>>>>>>>> OSPFv3 E- Intra-Area-Prefix-LSA, E-Inter-Area-Prefix-LSA, 
>>>>>>>>>>> E-AS-External-LSA, and E-Type-7-LSA [RFC8362].
>>>>>>>>>>> ...
>>>>>>>>>>> *  OSPFv3 Adj-SID Sub-TLV [RFC8666] in the OSPFv3 Router-Link 
>>>>>>>>>>> TLV [RFC8362].
>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 5) <!--[rfced] We note that there is no mention of "Extended Prefix Range TLV"
>>>>>>>>>>> in RFC 8362, but it is defined in RFC 8666 (note that 
>>>>>>>>>>> "Intra-Area-Prefix TLV", "Inter-Area-Prefix TLV", and "External-Prefix TLV" are defined in RFC 8362).
>>>>>>>>>>> Please review and let us know if/how the text or citation 
>>>>>>>>>>> should be updated for correctness.
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>>>>> *  OSPFv3 Prefix-SID Sub-TLV encodings [RFC8666] in the 
>>>>>>>>>>> OSPFv3 Intra- Area Prefix TLV, Inter-Area Prefix TLV, 
>>>>>>>>>>> External Prefix TLV, and
>>>>>>>>>>> OSPFv3 Extended Prefix Range TLV [RFC8362].
>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] We note that [RFC2328] and [RFC5340] are not 
>>>>>>>>>>> referenced in the YANG module but are listed in the introductory text for the YANG module.
>>>>>>>>>>> Additionally, [RFC8665], [RFC8666], [RFC9020], and [RFC9129] 
>>>>>>>>>>> are referenced in the YANG module but are not listed in the 
>>>>>>>>>>> introductory text. May we update the introductory text as 
>>>>>>>>>>> follows? Note that, if yes, we will also remove the references for [RFC2328] and [RFC5340] from the Normative References section.
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>>>>> [RFC2328], [RFC4915], [RFC5340], [RFC6991], [RFC8102], 
>>>>>>>>>>> [RFC8294], [RFC8349], [RFC9587], and 
>>>>>>>>>>> [I-D.ietf-rtgwg-segment-routing-ti-lfa] are referenced in the YANG module.
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>>>>>>>> [RFC4915], [RFC6991], [RFC8102], [RFC8294], [RFC8349], 
>>>>>>>>>>> [RFC8665], [RFC8666], [RFC9020]. [RFC9129], [RFC9587], and 
>>>>>>>>>>> [RFC9855] are referenced in the YANG module.
>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 7) <!--[rfced] We are having some difficulty parsing this 
>>>>>>>>>>> description text in the YANG module, particularly with 
>>>>>>>>>>> "interface" repeated. Please review and let us know how it should be updated for clarity.
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>>>>> This augments broadcast and non-broadcast multi-access 
>>>>>>>>>>> interface segment routing interface configuration.
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>>>>>>>> This augments broadcast and non-broadcast multi-access 
>>>>>>>>>>> interface Segment Routing and interface configuration.
>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 8) <!--[rfced] We have updated this description text in the 
>>>>>>>>>>> YANG module for clarity. Please review and confirm that the 
>>>>>>>>>>> intended meaning has not been altered.
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>>>>> A path providing node a disjoint path for SRLG links from the 
>>>>>>>>>>> primary path will be selected over one that doesn't provide 
>>>>>>>>>>> an SRLG disjoint path.
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Current:
>>>>>>>>>>> A path providing a node with a disjoint path for SRLG links 
>>>>>>>>>>> from the primary path will be selected over a path that 
>>>>>>>>>>> doesn't provide an SRLG disjoint path.
>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 9) <!--[rfced] We note that Derek Yeung is listed as an 
>>>>>>>>>>> author in the YANG module but is not listed as an author of 
>>>>>>>>>>> this document. Should we remove his name from the YANG module 
>>>>>>>>>>> and add it to the Acknowledgements section?
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>>>>> Author:   Derek Yeung
>>>>>>>>>>>           <mailto:derek@arrcus.com>
>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 10) <!--[rfced] FYI, we have made some updates to the 
>>>>>>>>>>> Security Considerations to match Section 3.7 of 
>>>>>>>>>>> draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis-28. Please let us know if any further updates are needed. Specifically:
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> - Should this sentence from the template be added? "There are no particularly sensitive RPC or action operations."
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 11) <!--[rfced] Abbreviations
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> a) FYI - We have added expansions for the following 
>>>>>>>>>>> abbreviations per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style 
>>>>>>>>>>> Guide"). Please review each expansion in the document carefully to ensure correctness.
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> IP Fast Reroute (IP-FRR)
>>>>>>>>>>> No Penultimate Hop-Popping) (No-PHP) Remote Loop-Free 
>>>>>>>>>>> Alternate  (RLFA) Segment Routing Local Block (SRLB)
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> b) Both the expansion and the acronym for the following terms 
>>>>>>>>>>> are used throughout the document. Would you like to update to 
>>>>>>>>>>> using the expansion upon first usage and the acronym for the rest of the document for consistency?
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Adjacency Segment Identifier, adjacency Segment ID, adjacency 
>>>>>>>>>>> SID (Adj-SID) Denial-of-Service (DoS) Remote LFA (RLFA) 
>>>>>>>>>>> Segment ID, Segment Identifier (SID) Segment Routing Mapping 
>>>>>>>>>>> Server, SR Mapping Server (SRMS) Segment Routing over MPLS 
>>>>>>>>>>> (SR-MPLS)
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> c) FYI, we updated the expansion of "SRLG" from "Shared 
>>>>>>>>>>> Resource Link Group" to "Shared Risk Link Group" to match how 
>>>>>>>>>>> it is expanded in past RFCs.
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> d) FYI, we updated one instance of "SRBG" to "SRGB" (Section 
>>>>>>>>>>> 4) to match usage in the rest of the document.
>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 12) <!-- [rfced] Terminology
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> a) Throughout the text, the following terminology appears to 
>>>>>>>>>>> be used inconsistently. Please review these occurrences and 
>>>>>>>>>>> let us know if/how they may be made consistent.
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Segment Routing vs. segment routing
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> b) For consistency and to reflect how they appear in 
>>>>>>>>>>> previously published RFCs, we have updated the terminology to 
>>>>>>>>>>> the form on the right. Please review and let us know if any further updates are needed.
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Adj-SID sub-TLV, Adj-SID sub-tlv, Adj-sid sub-tlv > Adj-SID 
>>>>>>>>>>> Sub-TLV
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Prefix SID Sub-TLV, prefix SID sub-TLV, Prefix SID sub-TLV > 
>>>>>>>>>>> Prefix-SID Sub-TLV
>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 13) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" 
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>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, 
>>>>>>>>>>> but this should still be reviewed as a best practice.
>>>>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you.
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> Alanna Paloma and Alice Russo RFC Production Center
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>>>> On Nov 21, 2025, at 10:57 AM, rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org wrote:
>>>>>>>>>>> 
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>>>>>>>>>>> 
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>>>>>>>>>>> 
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>>>>>>>>>>> RFC9903 (draft-ietf-ospf-sr-yang-50)
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>>>>>>>>>>> Title            : A YANG Data Model for OSPF Segment Routing over the MPLS Data Plane
>>>>>>>>>>> Author(s)        : Y. Qu, A. Lindem, Z. Zhang, I. Chen
>>>>>>>>>>> WG Chair(s)      : Acee Lindem, Christian Hopps, Yingzhen Qu
>>>>>>>>>>> Area Director(s) : Jim Guichard, Ketan Talaulikar, Gunter Van 
>>>>>>>>>>> de Velde