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Re: [AVTCORE] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc5285-bis-11

Roni Even <roni.even@huawei.com> Thu, 11 May 2017 06:36 UTC

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From: Roni Even <roni.even@huawei.com>
To: Vijay Gurbani <vijay.gurbani@nokia.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [AVTCORE] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc5285-bis-11
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Hi Vijay,
Thanks, I will fix these two nits
Roni

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Vijay Gurbani [mailto:vijay.gurbani@nokia.com]
> Sent: יום ד 10 מאי 2017 21:32
> To: gen-art@ietf.org
> Cc: draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc5285-bis.all@ietf.org; ietf@ietf.org; avt@ietf.org
> Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc5285-bis-11
> 
> Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review
> Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for
> the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call
> comments.
> 
> For more information, please see the FAQ at
> 
> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
> 
> Document: draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc5285-bis-11
> Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani
> Review Date: 2017-05-10
> IETF LC End Date: 2017-04-20
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary: Ready with nits.
> 
> Major issues: 0
> 
> Minor issues: 0
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> - S5: s/An example (this is only an example), where/An example where/
>   (I suspect that the reader will get the idea that this is only an
>    example.  There are a couple of occurrence of this in S5.)
> 
> - S6: s/When doing SDP Offer/When engaging in SDP Offer/
> 
> Thanks!
>

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