Re: [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-flexigrid-lambda-label-05.txt

["Adrian Farrel" <[e-mail]>]

All,

IETF last call reviews from Robert and Carlos highlighted a couple of nits and
asked for...

- clarification of how this document updates 3471 and 6205
- clarification of backward compatibility as distinct from manageability

This led me to...
- fix the nits
- add text to the end of the introduction
- significantly beef up section 5

There is no change to the technical content of the document.

Thanks,
Adrian

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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
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>  This draft is a work item of the Common Control and Measurement Plane
> Working Group of the IETF.
> 
>         Title           : Generalized Labels for the Flexi-Grid in Lambda
Switch Capable
> (LSC) Label Switching Routers
>         Authors         : Adrian Farrel
>                           Daniel King
>                           Yao Li
>                           Fatai Zhang
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-ccamp-flexigrid-lambda-label-05.txt
> 	Pages           : 16
> 	Date            : 2015-09-10
> 
> Abstract:
>    GMPLS supports the description of optical switching by identifying
>    entries in fixed lists of switchable wavelengths (called grids)
>    through the encoding of lambda labels.  Work within the ITU-T Study
>    Group 15 has defined a finer granularity grid, and the facility to
>    flexibly select different widths of spectrum from the grid.  This
>    document defines a new GMPLS lambda label format to support this
>    flexi-grid.
> 
>    This document updates RFC 3471 and RFC 6205 by introducing a new
>    label format.
> 
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