Re: [CCAMP] Fw: I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-03.txt

tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com> Tue, 05 November 2019 18:08 UTC

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From: tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com>
To: Zhenghaomian <zhenghaomian@huawei.com>, "ccamp@ietf.org" <ccamp@ietf.org>
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----- Original Message -----
From: "Zhenghaomian" <zhenghaomian@huawei.com>;
To: <ccamp@ietf.org>;
Sent: Saturday, November 02, 2019 2:17 PM

> Hi, WG,
>
> The OTN YANG models, including draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types,
draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-topo-yang, draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-tunnel-model, have
been updated. The authors believe the documents are ready to proceed for
YANG doctor review.

Looking at
draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-tunnel-model-09
it looks as if the YANG module has got ahead of the text in the I-D.

IANA Considerations registers two modules but I only see one YANG module
in the I-D

s.3.1
                  The OTN tunnel model
   also imports a few type modules, including ietf-otn-types, ietf-te-
   types and ietf-inet-types.
Not that I can see.

    import ietf-layer1-types {
      prefix "layer1-types";
      reference
      "I-D.ietf-ccamp-layer1-types:
          A YANG Data Model for Layer 1 Types. ";
I cannot see this I-D in the I-D references

Security
   Some of the RPC operations in this YANG module may be considered
   sensitive or vulnerable in some network environments.
I cannot see any RPC in this module

at which point I decided 'Revised I-D needed' and decided to wait for
that before performing a more detailed review.

Tom Petch

> A few technique issues have been fixed in module ietf-layer1-types,
with more description and clarification for grouping usage. Accordingly,
the module ietf-otn-topology and ietf-otn-tunnel have been inherited to
the latest ietf-layer1-types.
>
> This is a joint work and great contributions have been received from
the working group, your review and comments are welcome, as always.
Thank you.
>
> Best wishes,
> Haomian (on behalf of all authors & contributors)
>
>
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> 发送时间: 2019年11月2日 15:56
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>         Title           : A YANG Data Model for Layer 1 Types
>         Authors         : Haomian Zheng
>                           Italo Busi
> Filename        : draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-03.txt
> Pages           : 24
> Date            : 2019-11-02
>
> Abstract:
>    This document defines a collection of common data types and
groupings
>    in YANG data modeling language for layer 1 networks.  These derived
>    common types and groupings are intended to be imported by modules
>    that specifies the OTN networks, including the topology, tunnel,
>    client signal adaptation and service.
>
>
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