Re: [core] Review of draft-ietf-core-stateless-01 (editorial bits)

Klaus Hartke <hartke@projectcool.de> Sun, 04 August 2019 07:33 UTC

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Subject: Re: [core] Review of draft-ietf-core-stateless-01 (editorial bits)
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Thomas Fossati wrote:
> Section 1.1 defines the shorthand Client and Server.  In the remainder
> of the memo these are not used and the long version "server or
> intermediary in the server role" and "client or intermediary in the
> client role" are used instead.  Either use the shorthand or drop them.

Removed in -02.

> Section 1.1
>    [...] such as state for generating tokens and congestion control
>
> s/generating tokens/request retransmission/ ?

Token generation is at the request/response sub-layer; retransmissions
are at the messaging sub-layer. I've made the following change in -02:

-(such as state for generating tokens and congestion control)
+(such as for token generation, message retransmission, and congestion control)

Thanks!

Klaus

Re: [core] Review of draft-ietf-core-stateless-01… Thomas Fossati
Re: [core] Review of draft-ietf-core-stateless-01… Klaus Hartke