Re: [Detnet-dp-dt] check the dp dt draft "comment style"..

"Jouni" <jouni.nospam@gmail.com> Sun, 03 September 2017 21:02 UTC

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From: "Jouni" <jouni.nospam@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [Detnet-dp-dt] check the dp dt draft "comment style"..
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And the draft to those who cannot access the github.

- Jouni


> -----Original Message-----
> From: Jouni [mailto:jouni.nospam@gmail.com]
> Sent: Monday, September 4, 2017 00:00 AM
> To: detnet-dp-dt@ietf.org
> Cc: 'Loa Andersson' <loa@pi.nu>;; 'Lou Berger' <lberger@labn.net>;
> Subject: RE: [Detnet-dp-dt] check the dp dt draft "comment style"..
> 
> Folks,
> 
> I have edited all comments (SB, LA, and LB) into the draft. Have a quick
> look if I messed up with something. If stuff is OK I can submit this
> during Monday.
> 
> https://github.com/jounikor/draft-dt-detnet-dp-sol/blob/master/draft-dt-
> detn
> et-dp-sol-02.txt
> 
> - Jouni
> 
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: Loa Andersson [mailto:loa@pi.nu]
> > Sent: Friday, September 1, 2017 18:26 PM
> > To: Jouni <jouni.nospam@gmail.com>;
> > Cc: detnet-dp-dt@ietf.org
> > Subject: Re: [Detnet-dp-dt] check the dp dt draft "comment style"..
> >
> > Jouni,
> >
> > I suggest that we add a comment immediately after comment #6.
> >
> > Comment from Loa: Even though this document does not specify any OAM
> > functions, we will need to verify that the GACh (Generalized
> > Associated
> > Channel) works correctly in a network that has replication and
> > elimination.
> >
> > /Loa
> >
> > On 2017-08-31 20:12, Jouni wrote:
> > > Loa,
> > >
> > > Just propose text & place and you'll have it there.
> > >
> > > - Jouni
> > >
> > >> On 31 Aug 2017, at 13:39, Loa Andersson <loa@pi.nu>; wrote:
> > >>
> > >> Jouni, et.al.,
> > >>
> > >> This works for me, I think we should try to move now.
> > >>
> > >> I've one more things, that I think I did mention in a mail and at
> > >> some call. What happens if we want to use the GACh if we have
> > >> replication and elimination in the data plane?
> > >>
> > >> I think we should have a note about that somewhere.
> > >>
> > >> /Loa
> > >>
> > >> On 2017-08-28 00:13, Jouni wrote:
> > >>> Folks,
> > >>> Check the initial test with comments included (only abstract &
> > >>> intro so far). Is the style OK or do you want some other
> > >>> arrangement for the comments? Now they follow closely Stewart's
> > >>> review on the mailing list. We could group comments at the end of
> each section also?
> > >>> Comments? Preferences?
> > >>> - Jouni
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> > >>
> > >> Loa Andersson                        email: loa@mail01.huawei.com
> > >> Senior MPLS Expert                          loa@pi.nu
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> > >
> >
> > --
> >
> >
> > Loa Andersson                        email: loa@mail01.huawei.com
> > Senior MPLS Expert                          loa@pi.nu
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