[Detnet] draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-11

János Farkas <janos.farkas@ericsson.com> Wed, 06 February 2019 22:06 UTC

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Subject: [Detnet] draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-11
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Hi,

The DetNet architecture document has been updated to address the 
comments received on v10. The new revision (v11) is available at 
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-11.

The changes are contributions from the authors and have been aligned 
with the shepherd. The authors had multiple cycle discussions to refine 
the the text contributed to the list. The purpose of the refinements were:
- avoid the introduction of any new term
- avoid or minimize the use of terms that have been recently removed 
from the document
- improve clarity, e.g., remove "throttling" and replace it with clearer 
phrasing

The changes compared to v10 are shown here: 
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-11.

Best regards,
Janos