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Re: [dhcwg] Ben Campbell's Discuss on draft-ietf-dhc-relay-port-08: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

"Naiming Shen (naiming)" <naiming@cisco.com> Thu, 30 November 2017 01:26 UTC

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From: "Naiming Shen (naiming)" <naiming@cisco.com>
To: Ted Lemon <mellon@fugue.com>, Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com>
CC: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-dhc-relay-port@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-dhc-relay-port@ietf.org>, dhcwg <dhcwg@ietf.org>, "dhc-chairs@ietf.org" <dhc-chairs@ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: [dhcwg] Ben Campbell's Discuss on draft-ietf-dhc-relay-port-08: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
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Have a change in section 3.1, 3.2 and 5.4, please review to see if this is enough.
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- Naiming

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