Re: [DMM] Fwd: WGLC on draft-ietf-dmm-distributed-mobility-anchoring-11

Hi John,

Thanks a lot for your comments. We'll address in the new version after the
WGLC.

Carlos

On Wed, Jan 16, 2019 at 10:36 PM John Kaippallimalil <
John.Kaippallimalil@huawei.com> wrote:

> I had agreed to review this draft at the last IETF in Bangkok – so here it
> is.
>
>
>
> After reading the draft again, I think it is well written and ready to
> move forward.
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>
> A few minor comments for consideration:
>
> -           3.1.2, "the MN's chooses as source IP address of packets
> belonging to an IP flow, an address allocated by the network the MN is
> attached to when the flow was initiated"
>
> The sentence does not read well. The intention is probably that “the MN
> chooses a source IP address for packets …..” or something similar?
>
> -          4.1., "Regardless of whether IP mobility is needed, if the
> flow has terminated before the MN moves to a new network, the flow may
> subsequently restart using the new IP address assigned from the new
> network."
>
> Should the sentence be saying, "... if the flow has *not* terminated
> ...."
>
> -          4.2., For references to [Paper-Distributed.Mobility],
> [Paper-Distributed.Mobility.PMIP] and [Paper-Distributed.Mobility.Review]:
> would it be possible to give a sentence on the key point of each.  It would
> be easier for reading.
>
>
>
> BR,
>
> John
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>
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>
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> *From:* dmm [mailto:dmm-bounces@ietf.org] *On Behalf Of *Arashmid Akhavain
> *Sent:* Wednesday, January 16, 2019 9:00 AM
> *To:* Voyer, Daniel <daniel.voyer@bell.ca>; dmm@ietf.org
> *Subject:* Re: [DMM] Fwd: WGLC on
> draft-ietf-dmm-distributed-mobility-anchoring-11
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> Yes, +1, I support this draft
>
>
>
> Arashmid
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> Begin forwarded message:
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> From: *Sri Gundavelli (sgundave)* <sgundave@cisco.com>
> Date: Wed, Jan 9, 2019 at 7:43 PM
> Subject: [DMM] WGLC on draft-ietf-dmm-distributed-mobility-anchoring-11
> To: dmm@ietf.org <dmm@ietf.org>
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> Folks – As we discussed in the WG meeting at IETF103, we are issuing WGLC
> on draft-ietf-dmm-distributed-mobility-anchoring-11.
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> The document went through several revisions and there were good amount of
> reviews on this document.  The authors have addressed all the comments and
> there are no open issues that we are tracking at this time. We believe the
> document is ready for IESG reviews and like to confirm the same from the
> working group.
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> The following message commences a two week WGLC for all feedback.
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> Document Link:
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> https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-dmm-distributed-mobility-anchoring-11.txt
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> The target status for this document is “Informational”.
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> Please post any comments/concerns on the draft.
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> Thanks!
>
> Dapeng & Sri
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