[Dots] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-dots-architecture-16: (with COMMENT)

Adam Roach via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Wed, 05 February 2020 00:23 UTC

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Subject: [Dots] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-dots-architecture-16: (with COMMENT)
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Adam Roach has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-dots-architecture-16: No Objection

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Thanks for the work that went into creating this architecture document.
I found it a useful introduction to DOTS.

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§3.2.5:

Without needing to go into too much detail, it seems that this section would
benefit from citations to RFC 6886, RFC 7659, and ISO/IEC 29341-1-2:2017 as
alternate means to learn about NAT mappings.