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Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com> Thu, 16 January 2020 10:03 UTC

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From: Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com>
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Hi Authors,

With the WG chairs decision regarding the consenus on obsoleting the earlier
documents I want to get some form things correct in the documents.

1. Please use the header line "Obsoletes: RFCXXXX" as tooling uses this.

2. Abstract and Introduction do need to say that they are obsoleting some
documents and list them. It is fine to note that this are IRTF Stream documents
for extra clarity here. 

3. Scott added a sentence about requesting Obsoletion from IRTF. That is also
fine, but please do that in a separate statement that has an RFC-editor note
that the text shall be removed prior to publication. As the request does not
matter when the document has been published, then 1 and 2. fulfills the purpose
to indicate the obsoletion and the fact that it was cross stream one. 

I am also assuming that BPSec will obsolete RFC 6257 and that TCPCL will
obsolete RFC7242. As I don't know these documents in detail, if there are any
significant function that is now defined in your documents that was defined in
another RFC then we need to consider to include that also. Here I primarily
wonder if there are parts of RFC 5050 that was moved into BPSec or TCPCLv4? The
intention here is to ensure that if one look up RFC 5050 in the future one will
get a list of all documents that defines the replacing definition. 

Great that we finally are almost ready to proceed to IESG Evaluation.
 
Cheers

Magnus Westerlund 


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