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Subject: Re: [dtn] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dtn-bpbis-13.txt
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Scott,
Only two remaining comments on this draft:
1. I believe that the original 16-bit CRC citation (ITU V.42) should be left in, as the new "[CRC]" citation specifies only the 32-bit CRC used by BPv7. The ITU document does include a test vector, so there is no ambiguity for that implementation. So the draft would have a separate citation for each CRC type.

2. The CDDL needs to be updated for the last change of primary/payload block numbering. I've updated my local file at [1] for the corrected block numbering.

[1]: https://github.com/BSipos-RKF/dtn-bpbis-tcpcl/blob/develop/bpv7.cddl

On Tue, 2019-04-23 at 13:31 -0700, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:

A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.

This draft is a work item of the Delay/Disruption Tolerant Networking WG of the IETF.


        Title           : Bundle Protocol Version 7

        Authors         : Scott Burleigh

                          Kevin Fall

                          Edward J. Birrane

        Filename        : draft-ietf-dtn-bpbis-13.txt

        Pages           : 51

        Date            : 2019-04-23


Abstract:

   This Internet Draft presents a specification for Bundle Protocol,

   adapted from the experimental Bundle Protocol specification

   developed by the Delay-Tolerant Networking Research group of the

   Internet Research Task Force and documented in RFC 5050.



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