[Emu] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-emu-rfc5448bis-07: (with COMMENT)

[Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-emu-rfc5448bis-07: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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The apostrophe in "EAP-AKA'" makes me think there’s a typo present every time I
see it.

I primarily reviewed the diff between this document and RFC 5448.  Nothing
stood out to me as needing particular discussion.  The thorough treatment on
security, privacy, and vulnerability is appreciated.

Abstract:
* "memo" should really be "document".  (This was beaten into me by a previous
AD, but I kind of agree with it.)

Section 5.1:
Nit:
* List item (1)(b) is missing a closing parenthesis.

Section 7.2:
Nit:
* "There has also been attacks …" -- s/has/have/

Section 7.3:
Nit:
* "Perfect Forwards Secrecy …" -- s/Forwards/Forward/