Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-capture-format-08

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Wed, 21 November 2018 01:21 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-capture-format-08
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Meral, thanks for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa

> On Nov 13, 2018, at 7:22 PM, Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>; wrote:
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> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
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> For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>>;.
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> Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-capture-format-08
> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
> Review Date: 2018-11-13
> IETF LC End Date: 2018-11-13
> IESG Telechat date: 2018-11-21
>  
>  
> Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some comments.
> Major issues:
> Minor issues:
>  
> Nits/editorial comments:
> -[Page 21], last row in Table, "types are are omitted"----->"types are omitted"
> -[Page 21], last row in Table,  "If the data type is are omitted"----->"If the data type is omitted"
>  
> -[Page 22], Section 7.5, "collection and and"---->"collection and"
> -[Page 37], "may have be split"---->"may have been split"
> -[Page 37], "may have be sent"---->"may have been sent"
>  
> -[Page 38], "choronological"--->"chronological"
> -[Page 63], "schema to to read"---->"schema to read"
>  
> Best Regards,
> Meral
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> Meral Shirazipour
> Ericsson Research
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