[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-iab-rfcefdp-rfced-model-11
Christer Holmberg via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Fri, 11 February 2022 18:14 UTC
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Reviewer: Christer Holmberg Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-iab-rfcefdp-rfced-model-11 Reviewer: Christer Holmberg Review Date: 2022-02-11 IETF LC End Date: None IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: I have no major issues with the content of the document. I do have an editorial comment that I'd like the authors to address. Major issues: N/A Minor issues: N/A Nits/editorial comments: Section 1 says: "This document obsoletes [RFC8728] by defining version 3 of the RFC Editor Model. This document updates [RFC7841] by defining boilerplate text for the Editorial Stream. This document updates [RFC8729] by replacing the RFC Editor role with the RSWG, RSAB, and RSCE. This document updates [RFC8730] by removing the dependency on certain policies specified by the IAB and RSE." As there are no "Updates to RFCXXX" sections in the document, I think it would be useful to add references to the Sections where 7841, 8729 and 8730 are updated. E.g., the definition of the new stream is quite easy to find, but still.
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