[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-policy-14

[David Schinazi via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Reviewer: David Schinazi
Review result: Ready with Issues

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Document: draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-policy-14
Reviewer: David Schinazi
Review Date: 2021-11-12
IETF LC End Date: 2021-11-24
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Well written document. A few minor issues which should be trivial to
address.

Major issues: None

Minor issues:
- in s2.7, please specify if a higher number is more preferred or less preferred
- in s5.1, I would replace "A Segment-List of an explicit candidate path MUST
be declared invalid when:" with "A Segment-List of an explicit candidate path
MUST be declared invalid when any of the following is true:" (unless you mean
"all of the following"

Nits/editorial comments:
- the term headend is never defined. If it's a term of art in this area perhaps
a reference to the document that defines it would help? But if every reader is
expected to know the term because of the required context then that might be OK.