[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-bchv-rfc6890bis-06

[Paul Kyzivat <[e-mail]>]

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Document: draft-bchv-rfc6890bis-06
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2017-04-22
IETF LC End Date: 2017-03-10
IESG Telechat date: 2017-04-25

Summary:

This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should 
be fixed before publication.

General Comments:

This version is *much* easier to understand than the -04 version that I 
previously reviewed.

Issues:

Major: 0
Minor: 0
Nits:  1

(1) Nit:

In section 2.3 the requested handling of footnotes is confusing.
IIUC, the intent is:

- add a new footnote between the existing [1] and [2];

- add a new footnote at the end after the existing [5];

- renumber the footnotes sequentially (from [1] to [7]);

- adjust all the existing footnote references to refer to the same
   footnote as previously, but using the new numbering;

- then, add references to the new footnotes [2] and [7] to the entries
   for TEREDO and Unique-Local.

It took me a few readings of the current text to convince myself that is 
what you intended. It would be better to be more explicit about it.