[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-doh-dns-over-https-13

Stewart Bryant <stewart.bryant@gmail.com> Tue, 14 August 2018 11:19 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-doh-dns-over-https-13

Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-doh-dns-over-https-13
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2018-08-14
IETF LC End Date: 2018-08-08
IESG Telechat date: 2018-08-16

Summary:

This is useful work, it is well written  and is ready for publication

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

I accept that I am going to be in the rough, but I do not like the term "on the
wire".

My recollection from my hardware days is that the output shift register sends
the data in such a way that if I were to put an oscilloscope on the wire, the
bit patterns would not match those shown in this text. What I think are
presented in the text are raw RFC1035 messages in network byte order.

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-do… Stewart Bryant