[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-dprive-padding-policy-04

Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> Tue, 03 April 2018 22:43 UTC

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From: Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

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Document: draft-ietf-dprive-padding-policy-04
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2018-04-03
IETF LC End Date: 2018-04-04
IESG Telechat date: NA


Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Experimental RFC but I have comments.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
[Page 3], Section 3 nits:
"(eg. "---->"(e.g. "
"signifcantly"---->"significantly"
"octects"---->"octets"

[Page 5], Section 4.4 nits:
"transction"---->"transaction"

[Page 5], Section 5 nits:
"octects."---->"octets."




Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
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